Weirdo in a Weirdworld

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I woke up and everyone was purple Except me, of course I wanna be purple I hope it’s okay that I’m still a pinkskin I hope that I’m not that different than you But maybe it’s okay to be different To be a stranger in an estrangedland Walking hand in hand with my lover Who happens to be purple, of course

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/26/2025 10:34:00 AM

Hello Benjamin, this is a lovely piece. It took me back to the Singer Prince. To each his own I say. Different is great.

Jan Terry

Date: 3/1/2025 9:41:00 AM

I get it. I've got purple hair so, perhaps, I'm weird in this world; if so, it's by choice. Anyway, I'm me and it's ok to be different. In fact, I find it delightful. I love the theme of your poem. I will happily read more of your gems.

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/1/2025 4:20:00 PM

What a lovely comment. I once painted my hair all rainbowlike colors at a music festival once. What wonderful memories. Thanks for stopping by.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/1/2025 2:05:00 AM

thanks for the smiles, you Made me think of the late singer Prince! hugs jan xx

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/1/2025 4:21:00 PM

I miss Prince. He was a musical genius. And thank you for the smiles.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/28/2025 9:01:00 PM

Aww..this is a cute one..I think you may need a touch of blue if you want to blend in with the purple people, just not too much though..

Alesia Leach

Date: 2/28/2025 6:27:00 PM

It has a whimsical, almost absurdist feel to it, but underneath, there’s a clear theme of belonging, difference, and acceptance. The imagery of wanting to be purple like everyone else but realizing it’s okay to be different gives it a simple yet thoughtful depth.

Benjamin Bartley
Date: 3/1/2025 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for your insightful comments. I love your poetry too.