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Weird Place

7/17/15


In a wierd place
for a year straight

Looking up watching the hawks fly
While being walked by
Regardless of if the plants and terrain got dry
The position remained the same beside a drain, and was always cockeyed
 
Easily I float in the wind
And many a times landed nearby a tire that started to smoke and spin


one side is blank
And covered with spots of paint
From a can that opened and spilled after falling out a crate
To this date
The other side has words that are great
So much so that many others could relate
If they only took the time to pick it up and read what it states
then just maybe it wouldn't all go to waste

If thats the case
And it quickly disintegrates
With very little trace
Then eventually it will turn into more molecules amid space

By: Dalton Ogletree

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/9/2017 11:41:00 AM
I enjoyed this. I think I've also been in that place. Check out my poems if you get a chance.The most popular ones are (by # of comments): 1. Jello For The Neighboors 2. No-Name No:18 3. How To Grow A Tree 4. behind a coffee shop with paper planes 5. No Man 6. If Hell Rose To The Surface We Would All Have Burnt Feet and also a new poem I just put up.
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Date: 1/9/2017 9:38:00 AM
Very well said in a modern style ...
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Dalton Ogletree
Date: 1/9/2017 10:30:00 AM
Thank you very much Probir!

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