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Weighted Ground

I stand here lonely on this weighted ground
The wind never able to knock me around
For I'm in love so deep it's to him I'm forever bound
That very love is one with which I always cause myself to drown
I pick myself up but the force just again pulls me back down
I'm lost many times waiting by him to be once again found
Left here feeling foolish and looking to everyone like a clown
And I hate getting stuck in that crowd
I try not to hear but their voices are so deafingly loud
Don't keep letting your heart break, to yourself that you can't allow
All these emotions whirling my mind is it any wonder I'm not in heaven up above the clouds
I think that one can agree with all this and more upon my shoulders it's easy to surmise to 
why I'm standing on this weighted ground
All these things keep me grounded here spinning so that the strong wind can never knock me 
around
It's the weight of all words said or never heard, all the emotions felt deep and the ones that 
just won't detour that keeps me inside tied up and wound
I long for the time to arrive when all the weight from me is lifted and the voices to be quiet, 
silenced then forever so to which they will never again make any lonely heart wrenching 
sounds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/12/2008 8:10:00 AM
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Date: 12/10/2008 11:23:00 AM
Matthew 11: 28-30---"Hello Precious & Blessed Sandy Schermerhorn!"~What a very deep and profound write of heart and soul here dear lady!~"I hate getting stuck in that crowd"~What a wonderful verse of truth; that I could completely feel, understand and relate with dear---I truly like writers such as yourself-whom speak from their hearts, and not just their wandering minds----Good to have met you and read you dear lady!~"Much Warmth & Many Blessings To You, Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays Dear!"~
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Date: 12/9/2008 12:39:00 PM
might not think so but kGod has better plan's for you. I know it's hard and I can feel lyour heartfelt pain and sorrow. But you are beautiful inside and that loving heart you have men would die for. Decent men that is not one to cast you aside when they feel like they selfishly want to. Sandy don't ever forget the specail qualities that you have. And please don't hardened your heart. I want to be your friend in Christ to help you get through. If you like. I will be here for you.GBU
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Date: 12/9/2008 12:33:00 PM
Sandy your love is felt your hurt and desires known. You reach out for someone that could never appreciate the wonder and love of lyou. Not deserving of a precious soul like your's. I feel so sad that your tender heart is being tortured and tormented it seems this happens to the best most caring people that take their commitment's the way God intended. My heart and soul have been going through what you have. We are one my friend I reach out to you Sandy and pray for better tomorrow's. you..cont
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