Weighing the Unmeasurable

When love is weighed against a precious stone,
The diamond surely earns its flawless boast.
As cruel time eats flesh and powders bone,
The rock retains one form, outlasting most.

While love alone won’t even tip the scale,
The crowning jewels could own the world; 
While faith and loyalty can often fail,
The purity of gems can’t be unfurled.

Keeping love alive is an endeavor,
While a diamond’s luster never teeters.
Everyone knows diamonds are forever
Yet fragility makes love much sweeter.

White diamonds are reduced to common sand
While slipping in between my sweetheart's hands.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 2:05 AM
Nicole, Awesome win ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 5:55 PM
what an interesting comparison of love and fine jewels. bIg congrats on your win.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Nicole
Gorelick Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 8:40 PM
Enjoyed! Congrats on your win. BG
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM
Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
Allison Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 4:09 PM
beautifully penned with lovely - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:04 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congrats on the win, nicole
Crenshaw Avatar
December 30, 2013 at 12:44 PM
VERY WELL DONE! excellent message. clever lines. and truth. great mix. you rock.
A  Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 12:46 AM
Nicole,, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
Del Rimsey Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 4:35 AM
I like this. Its every thing I couldn't get to the surface. Wow.very beautiful
A   Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:55 PM
hi, Nicole, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 4:09 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Nicole ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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