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Weighing the Unmeasurable

When love is weighed against a precious stone, The diamond surely earns its flawless boast. As cruel time eats flesh and powders bone, The rock retains one form, outlasting most. While love alone won’t even tip the scale, The crowning jewels could own the world; While faith and loyalty can often fail, The purity of gems can’t be unfurled. Keeping love alive is an endeavor, While a diamond’s luster never teeters. Everyone knows diamonds are forever Yet fragility makes love much sweeter. White diamonds are reduced to common sand While slipping in between my sweetheart's hands.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/30/2014 2:05:00 AM
Nicole, Awesome win ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/27/2014 5:55:00 PM
what an interesting comparison of love and fine jewels. bIg congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/24/2014 10:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Nicole
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Date: 11/22/2014 8:40:00 PM
Enjoyed! Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 11/22/2014 4:45:00 PM
Congrad's on Your Win! Light & LOVE
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Date: 11/22/2014 4:09:00 PM
beautifully penned with lovely - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/7/2014 9:04:00 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congrats on the win, nicole
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Date: 12/30/2013 12:44:00 PM
VERY WELL DONE! excellent message. clever lines. and truth. great mix. you rock.
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Date: 12/26/2013 12:46:00 AM
Nicole,, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/21/2013 4:35:00 AM
I like this. Its every thing I couldn't get to the surface. Wow.very beautiful
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:55:00 PM
hi, Nicole, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/20/2013 4:09:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Nicole ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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