Francine Roberts Poet Nonet

Weeps

~~  Weeps ~~

This message I send to ask for help

To escape this prison I'm in.

My heart is encased in stone,

No longer free to love.

The walls are so high,

Blocking all light.

In the dark

My heart

Weeps.





for Linda Marie's "Message In A Bottle" contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 8, 2011 at 10:31 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win Francine. Love, Carol

Kash Poet March 8, 2011 at 9:02 AM Very emotional write here Francine!Congrats on your win!--kashinath

Tahera Mannan March 8, 2011 at 12:42 AM Super congratulations for this win dear friend.

Carolyn Devonshire March 7, 2011 at 2:18 PM The stone builds up quickly around a heart that's been wounded, Francine. You took a very creative perspective on the contest and I see from the comments you are among the winners. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Sharon Ruebel March 7, 2011 at 10:50 AM Hello Francene, Congratulations on your win in the contest. So sad but once of which I can relate to. Beautiful my dear Lov, Shar

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM what a heartfelt and stirring piece this is.. sad yet beautifully written - congrats on your win Francine :)

Wilma Neels March 7, 2011 at 3:45 AM Quite an emotional and beautiful Nonet Francine, congratulations on your win in Linda's contest :)

Tahera Mannan March 7, 2011 at 12:12 AM oh So sad and forlorn. many congrats for this win.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2011 at 6:45 PM a well deserved win. I just knew it would be on the list! Congratulations, Francine.

John Freeman March 6, 2011 at 5:33 PM So great to see you at the top in this one Francine. Congratulations on your worthy fourth place honored poem. Agape, Moses

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2011 at 3:51 PM a fantastic write that casts a magic spell, francine! CHEERS for the super win..:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick March 6, 2011 at 3:21 PM Congratulations on your fine 4th Place win in Linda's contest. Annalise

Dr.Ram Mehta March 6, 2011 at 2:15 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Linda, Francine

Michael J. Falotico March 6, 2011 at 12:57 PM Congrats Francine on this well deserved win... nothing short of great..always Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 6, 2011 at 12:13 PM Congrats Francine on your success in my contest.. excellent touching message luv.. thankxx for your constant support...

James Fraser March 6, 2011 at 6:45 AM I know how you feel Francine. Been there for quite a few years now. Good luck in the contest with this emotional piece....:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 5, 2011 at 12:02 PM what a very sad yet very moving nonet, Francine! A different take on the challenge and very wonderfully written-- wish you the best with this very stirring piece :)

Michael J. Falotico March 4, 2011 at 3:02 PM Very good write, I can feel the sadness and cry for help... Best of luck in the contest... Michael

Andrea Dietrich March 4, 2011 at 8:16 AM A very helpless sounding one, Francine. I hope someone finds that bottle!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2011 at 6:03 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Francine ...good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer so as not to spoil my fun and enjoyment of this piece... happy weekend..

Robert Pettit March 3, 2011 at 10:08 PM How soon will it be with your hearing before the parole board? Nice nonet, Francine

Don Johnson March 3, 2011 at 3:20 PM Great verse Francine....great comments too Perhaps I will come in the astral carry you away on my steed sure as the flight of the kestrel big water to swim yes indeed love Don

Joe Flach March 3, 2011 at 1:50 PM Nicely done Francine. A sure winner. Joe

Nette Onclaud March 3, 2011 at 12:53 PM oh, francine.. a soulful write that tugs the heart! love the mood and touching lines... winning luck to you! :) huggs, nette