Weeping Willow

She's exhausted and spent, looking beaten and bent. And like Medusa's locks, Her coiffure awes and shocks. Slumping, She never sleeps, humming songs as She weeps. And while mimicking birds, the wind whistles the words. She sheds raindrops like tears, stifling the children's cheers. For like the fickle sun, Her tears ruin their fun. Flailing branches of green, She's a sight to be seen. For wailing with each breeze, She's unlike other trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:10 PM
A fun description, Emile.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Lovely, Emile! Congrats!
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2017 at 5:32 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Sands Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations Emile :)
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 3:46 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Wood Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 11:07 PM
I always look for your poems in the contests Emile. Enjoyed this a lot. - Dean
Pinet Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much Dean, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Coreggia Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 1:11 PM
Reading this beautiful poem was such a treat. This is a tree that brings back childhood memories as I spent many hours as a kid playing under the dense foliage of a weeping willow:) Amitiés
Pinet Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 2:49 PM
Thanks Anne-Marie, your comments have brightened my day, Emile.
Allison Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 9:27 AM
You describe the weeping willow so vividly Emile I love the personification:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 9:41 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Wonderful write Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thanks Maureen, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Leiser Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Your expressions of the weeping willow are sublime, Emile! This should do very well in the contest...excellent 7+
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 8:12 PM
Thanks Laura, your comments have brightened my day, Emile.
Walker Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Very beautiful Emile. I really enjoyed this :) It also reminded me - I had a gorgeous weeping willow in my yard at one time, I grew it from a sapling for 15 years - but a solitary twister that went ONLY through my yard, ripped it in two and took it down forever. Even stranger, nothing else in the area was even slightly damaged, (that tree grew right by house and driveway), but those halves of that tree fell in two directions, but never touched my home or my car as they fell with only inches to spare. Blessings...
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 4:56 PM
Thanks so much Lenna, for sharing that story with us. I appreciate both your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:55 PM
- A unique tree, I do not think I've seen it before - Beautifully written, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, it is one of my favorite trees, I remember growing up with one... I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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