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Weeping Willow



The majestic weeping willow that grew in grandmother's backyard, was our secret place to drink tea, read books, and play cards.The bowing branches, so like a gentleman offering his hand, opened magically into this domed fairyland. Graciously accepting the invitation, we would climb... to hear the lazy buzzing bees and lose all sense of time. Hidden away, a sacred court between friends,I know I'll never feel as safe again.
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Dutta Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Weeping Willow seems very interesting to me. The tree charms and fascinates me. In my daughter’s residence beside a lake, the Weeping Willow always attracted me. Hugs.
Woods Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 12:43 PM
So lovely to see you here! Thank you for coming by! Xo
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 4:03 PM
Hello Crystol, i use to read books under a Weeping Willow Tree. it was shady there. Enjou your evening my friend. hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Helloo Crystol, No it did not have tons of bees. I sat under it for the shade. it was peaceful there. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darelene/
Woods Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:13 PM
The best place!! Did yours have a ton of bees? It was constantly white noise and made me so sleepy! Xoxo
Rose  Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:31 AM
I will fav this beauty, your memories are gold and your willow spectacular girl, have a blessed day full of blessings, :)
Woods Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 10:37 AM
Awe! That's wonderful, thank you! You have a good day too! Xo
Onclaud Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 6:41 PM
this piece is a charm...I hope it's a 6 line poem! blessings
Woods Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Does 6 lines mean 6 sentences or six actual lines...? Thanks so much!
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