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For 6 lines contest...BiteSize Poem no.86'
The majestic weeping willow that grew in grandmother's backyard, was our secret place to drink tea, read books, and play cards.The bowing branches, so like a gentleman offering his hand, opened magically into this domed fairyland. Graciously accepting the invitation, we would climb... to hear the lazy buzzing bees and lose all sense of time. Hidden away, a sacred court between friends,I know I'll never feel as safe again.

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Date: 7/2/2024 6:54:00 AM
Weeping Willow seems very interesting to me. The tree charms and fascinates me. In my daughter’s residence beside a lake, the Weeping Willow always attracted me. Hugs.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/2/2024 12:43:00 PM
So lovely to see you here! Thank you for coming by! Xo
Date: 6/24/2024 4:03:00 PM
Hello Crystol, i use to read books under a Weeping Willow Tree. it was shady there. Enjou your evening my friend. hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2024 10:07:00 AM
Helloo Crystol, No it did not have tons of bees. I sat under it for the shade. it was peaceful there. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darelene/
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/24/2024 10:13:00 PM
The best place!! Did yours have a ton of bees? It was constantly white noise and made me so sleepy! Xoxo
Date: 6/24/2024 9:31:00 AM
I will fav this beauty, your memories are gold and your willow spectacular girl, have a blessed day full of blessings, :)
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/24/2024 10:37:00 AM
Awe! That's wonderful, thank you! You have a good day too! Xo
Date: 6/23/2024 6:41:00 PM
this piece is a charm...I hope it's a 6 line poem! blessings
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Crystol Woods
Date: 6/23/2024 6:49:00 PM
Does 6 lines mean 6 sentences or six actual lines...? Thanks so much!

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