Weep O Willows

Sigh you wind whispering willows
Green sentinels of the ocean blue
Her feet edge no more the billows
Where canoes dock and salt sprays spew
Sigh for the loss of responsiblity
Sigh for the death of sensibility

See you not these cold, worn stones
That in their stoic composure stay
And water laps sand muted of groans
Though a mutual tenant passed away
O willows weep, for the sun is set
On my heart made barren by regret.

She lived here without pretense or grief
Scrubbing floors, clothes, pots, and pans
For pittance spent as dust in a sieve
She earned her status with her hands
And knew all the fishermen by name
Who sold her the small ones when she came.

By light of night she fed her family food
And by the faith of her soul she stood
Against fear or doubt, grace was the mood
Tears was from the smoke of cooking wood
Weep then for the lady gone in silence 
And stir the stones to standard sentience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 3:18 PM
I do so miss your writing! You are among my favorite writers, I was wondering if you were interested in the challenge of my new contest? To try to write in a FORM you don’t normally use . I would like to showcase in a contest the BEST and Brightest, but it’s only fair you challenge yourself. Please do let us see a new write from YOU in a new form! Light & Love Always Debbie
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September 29, 2009 at 8:55 PM
L'nass, though I haven't seen you around much lately, I am reminded of your talent with this poem. Honest view. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 26, 2009 at 4:04 AM
Congrats 2u on your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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September 25, 2009 at 7:20 AM
L'nass,...congratulations on your first round entry on a fantastic as always poem !!!! james
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September 25, 2009 at 6:04 AM
Dear L'Nass , this is a magnificant poerm. Best wishes through to the next round. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals L'nass. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Shango, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 5, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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September 1, 2009 at 6:17 AM
CONGRADULATIONS!!!! On your poem being featured this week. Beautifully done L'nass!
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September 1, 2009 at 5:33 AM
Congratulations on having your well-written poem featured this week. I still like it. Smiles. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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August 31, 2009 at 11:39 PM
L'nass, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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August 31, 2009 at 4:03 PM
The wonderful imagery paints a picture with words. Much for the reader to think about. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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August 31, 2009 at 12:34 PM
Soup Mail!
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August 31, 2009 at 12:28 PM
Wow! So poignant and poetic! It flows so beautifully! I really love the first two stanzas of your poem. Really nice. Congratulations on your well deserved feature.
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August 31, 2009 at 7:24 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful pieces. You are great L'nass! Adeleke
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August 31, 2009 at 3:57 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week L'nass. Hope to see many more of yours featured. Love, Carol
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August 31, 2009 at 3:36 AM
Hi, Just saw this as a featured poem. Congratulations, it truly touches the heart and is written beautifully, bursting with feeling, Well done. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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August 31, 2009 at 12:05 AM
Congrats on your featured poem this week L'nass.Rgds Brian
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August 30, 2009 at 6:58 PM
This most lovely of all poems...so deserving to be here among the featured works this week! A wonderful touching and this shows your heart, poem! Congratulations, L'nass! ~love, Carrie
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July 29, 2009 at 4:08 PM
so wonderful, loving..insightful & a good one for Sami's contest though you will be competing with me. I know you may disagree with my The Body & the Blood but it is in a sympathic vein to the above verse.....I have just revised it...see what you think? Light and Love..wordmaster..PS to my fav's
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May 8, 2009 at 7:06 AM
L'nass,...you have great poise in your writes,..this clearly shows in this poetry! Belated congrats on this poetry being featured! This is a great poem. james
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April 21, 2009 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations L'nass on "Weep O Willows" being featured this week. Vince
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April 21, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Congrats on this piece being featured-- they've chosen wisely this time around
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April 20, 2009 at 11:04 PM
this is very good, i like the way it reads. wonderful flow.
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April 20, 2009 at 8:45 PM
Shango, Congrats on having your poem featured!
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