Weep By the Tide

As mist descended far and low, 
dark storm clouds stirred the sea. 
Upon the rocks a maiden lay, 
weep by the tide did she.
 
Fair English rose, her skin so pure, 
awash with salty dew. 
Now tarnished, long cascading hair 
once glowed a golden hue. 
 
A sailor's charm did claim her heart 
when first he stepped ashore. 
He courted her, imbibed her love, 
then told he'd stay no more. 
 
His soul betrothed to ocean's breeze, 
firm land was not for he. 
Horizon-bound, his ship set sail 
o'er black and verdigris. 
 
As tempest ragings galled the waves 
beneath the moonless skies, 
a haunting sorrow chased the wind, 
midst echoes from her sighs.
 
'cross briny depths she cried her vow 
to wait eternally. 
Forever on those rocks she lay, 
weep by the tide did she.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nubani Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 10:58 AM
This is Beautiful :) and Powerful, it touched me :D
Austin Avatar
November 1, 2011 at 2:44 PM
Enjoyed this myth of yours mucho.Congrats on the selection. daver
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October 31, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Sharon, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Sharon. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 31, 2011 at 9:48 AM
Congrats Sharon on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
Bagnall Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:46 AM
Haunting and beautiful, superbly written, has a really nice flow to the words. Best I've read today.
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 11:15 PM
Hey,cool, I found an older one I had not commented to yet. but this topic looks so familiar .Did you do one like this another time? Or maybe I read someone else that did this topic. Thanks for commenting to my poems, Sharon. Lovely having you back. Andrea
Holmes Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 9:17 AM
Wow! Who needs TV when there's stuff as this that stirs the soul! Excellent.
Fraser Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 5:10 AM
Wow Sharon, what a delight to read, it's wonderful. May i say thank you for your always kind comments. Have a lovely weekend >> James
Knop Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 7:43 AM
Lovely written poem, Sharon! Enjoyed reading it! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Have a nice week...Gert
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 5:51 PM
A nice rhyming poem
Falotico Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:51 PM
LOVE IT! well written and with such a wonderful flow.. always Michael
Richards Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 4:22 PM
I love this! It reads like a poem from the classics of old!! Excellent! :) Love, Carrie
A  Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:56 PM
NICE WRITE, ENJOYED
Devonshire Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:51 PM
She couldn't take the sailor from the sea, so she chose to wait for him eternally. What a magical story, Sharon. I could see this unfolding. Love, Carolyn
Belt Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 3:45 PM
This is great.....with awesome rhyme.....Larry
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