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Weep By the Tide

As mist descended far and low, dark storm clouds stirred the sea. Upon the rocks a maiden lay, weep by the tide did she. Fair English rose, her skin so pure, awash with salty dew. Now tarnished, long cascading hair once glowed a golden hue. A sailor's charm did claim her heart when first he stepped ashore. He courted her, imbibed her love, then told he'd stay no more. His soul betrothed to ocean's breeze, firm land was not for he. Horizon-bound, his ship set sail o'er black and verdigris. As tempest ragings galled the waves beneath the moonless skies, a haunting sorrow chased the wind, midst echoes from her sighs. 'cross briny depths she cried her vow to wait eternally. Forever on those rocks she lay, weep by the tide did she.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/2/2011 10:58:00 AM
This is Beautiful :) and Powerful, it touched me :D
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Date: 11/1/2011 2:44:00 PM
Enjoyed this myth of yours mucho.Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 10/31/2011 4:48:00 PM
Sharon, Congratulations on your featured poem of the week.. take care and have yourself a safe and fun Halloween night,..p.d.
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Date: 10/31/2011 12:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserving poetry being featured this week Sharon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2011 9:48:00 AM
Congrats Sharon on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful write to share with luv..
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:46:00 AM
Haunting and beautiful, superbly written, has a really nice flow to the words. Best I've read today.
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Date: 2/2/2011 11:15:00 PM
Hey,cool, I found an older one I had not commented to yet. but this topic looks so familiar .Did you do one like this another time? Or maybe I read someone else that did this topic. Thanks for commenting to my poems, Sharon. Lovely having you back. Andrea
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Date: 6/13/2010 9:17:00 AM
Wow! Who needs TV when there's stuff as this that stirs the soul! Excellent.
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:10:00 AM
Wow Sharon, what a delight to read, it's wonderful. May i say thank you for your always kind comments. Have a lovely weekend >> James
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Date: 5/31/2010 7:43:00 AM
Lovely written poem, Sharon! Enjoyed reading it! Keep your pen flowing and thank you for your comments...Have a nice week...Gert
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Date: 5/30/2010 5:51:00 PM
A nice rhyming poem
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:51:00 PM
LOVE IT! well written and with such a wonderful flow.. always Michael
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:22:00 PM
I love this! It reads like a poem from the classics of old!! Excellent! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:56:00 PM
NICE WRITE, ENJOYED
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:51:00 PM
She couldn't take the sailor from the sea, so she chose to wait for him eternally. What a magical story, Sharon. I could see this unfolding. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:45:00 PM
This is great.....with awesome rhyme.....Larry
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