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Weening Sensations

There is beauty in your absence
     there is greatness in your silence
there is pain in your wishes
     In your innards, there are dreams
Poetry and you are synonymous
     I am synonymous with love
how I love you both.

      Poetry is a susurrus
that tickles the nooks
      and crannies of resourcefulness
every recourse, every nook
      and cranny, and life itself
the shadow lives inside me
      an almost flawless replica.

It moves when she moves
         smiles when she smiles
all is well, a shadow says
         shadows from the past
stretch longer when the sun sets. 

         Weaning from the breast
of grief and tears
         becomes starker and harsher
Mother, you are long gone
        yet in the fading light
I suckle on your memories.

5th place contest winner 

Written: January 28, 2023

Your Pick Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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George Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 8:05 PM
"Mother, you are long gone yet in the fading light I suckle on your memories." Beautiful lines and beautiful poem with a great title. Congratulations dear Lasaad on your great win.
Sambourne Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 2:20 PM
So well expressed in poetically merging the love of a mother with the beauty + power of verse. Sublime. Many congratulations, Brian
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 11:13 AM
An engrossing poem, with wonderful imagery. Best wishes for the contest, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 6:40 AM
Splendid write my friend. Opening stanza is a fabulous start to rest of your poem.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 28, 2023 at 11:01 PM
Great emotive sensations. Best for a win.
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