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For Jami Patterson's The Seed Of Fear Poetry Contest

My interpretation of nursery rhyme Wee Willy Winky's "seed of fear"

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Wee Willy Winky is Creepy

Wee Willy Winky creeps about the town
Into children’s bedrooms he’ll be peeking.
Sometimes if he finds an open window,
into that child’s room he will go sneaking.

He fancies himself a Sandman.
But nothing like the Sandman is he.
No peace does he bring the sleepless kid
as he creeps about in hours that are wee.

He sprinkles no sand into sleepy eyes,
but he slides like a ninja beneath a child's bed,
then mutters low sounds that he thinks are soothing,
but he frightens most children instead!

“Go to sleep; go to sleep,” he sometimes whispers.
Children who hear this are filled with fear.
Too terrified are they to leave their bed.
They think that the boogeyman must be near.

Wee Willy Winky, you do nobody good
as you creep all around in your nightgown.
Some of those you visit get PTSD.
You ought to be jailed and banished from town.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rolland Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:30 PM
enjoyed the descriptive and atmosphere, little creepy, thanks poet
Narain Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 11:51 AM
Lol. He ought bto be in jail. nice poem.
DiMino Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:47 AM
Sounds like he definitely should be banished or jailed. Wee Willy Winky, sounds a bit creepy, and stinky! The scotch is good though. Love it!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 1:33 AM
Hi Andrea, I must be suffering from PTSD since my fall in 2023. Lovely poem. Best of luck for the contest. A lovely poem.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Yikes!
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 9:59 PM
LOL :D
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 5:25 PM
loved the impish quality of this poem. A most unique take for the contest. Nicely done...best wishes with the contest, Sara
Bayles Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 12:39 PM
You paint a delightful tale with this poem, Andrea,
Woods Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:59 AM
Lol! This is good! Yes very creepy! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Wee Willy Winky is Creepy" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away............
Maverick Avatar
August 31, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Done Andrea.' The miscreant is no more.' I might Charge a slight fee.' But won't bill you intill 2030 Thst way i'll have caught up with inflation, which I think wee willy never did' btw..Is he related to (Old clausie?) On circumstantial evidence, at Present. Only.'
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