Wedding Vows

Her Vows.
I love you more than mashed potatoes, or tea in my favourite mug.
I love you more than curling up on the sofa with a rug.
I love you more than a manicure, more than George Clooney too,
I love you more than a thunderstorm, that's how much I love you.
More than a trinket from Tiffany's (well, almost I should say)
But I 'specially love you lots and lots, today, our Wedding Day.

His vows.
I love you more than a mega-byte, or a beer on a Saturday night,
I love you more than Ipswich Town (well if they loose I think I might)
I love you more than a skiing trip, and more than five-a-side,
I love you more than fish and chips, my love I just can't hide.
I love you more than a compact disc, and more than a good read,
I'll marry you, of you'll take the risk, you're all I'll ever need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 6/9/2014 4:08:00 PM
Alright :).....had to come back for more! I'm enjoying these writes. Love your style. [no signs that your pen is green....more gold coloured!] // paul
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Date: 6/10/2014 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poems I'm glad you're liking them. Your comments are very encouraging. I love your "Time" and am looking forward to reading more of your work. All good wishes, Shirley. x P.S Have just posted another one!!
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