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This poem is included in my Book/eBook ‘Clive’s Uni-Verse – A Cornishman’s take on life’.  Published by Olympia Publishers in Jan 2022.

May we forever be lovers, May we forever be friends, And should we hurt each other, May we quickly make amends. May we enjoy our passion, But never let compassion die, Thinking in selfless terms as we, Never emphasising I. May we forever be soul-mates, May our love eternally last, May the food of love sustain us, May we never have to fast. May we use each other’s strengths, When we are feeling weak, May we both learn to compromise, And always as one voice speak. May we never keep dark secrets, May we never tell each other lies, May we both work unceasingly, To ensure our love never dies.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/29/2022 10:52:00 PM
[This poem is included in my latest book and eBook 'Clive's Uni-Verse - A Cornishman's take on life' published by Olympia Publishers 27 Jan 2022]
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Date: 10/17/2020 3:09:00 AM
Lovely vows.. great before marriage, but how many keep them after...
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Date: 10/17/2020 4:00:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Yes, in these days of very high expectations and a world which seems to be getting more complicated by the day, vows are not easy to keep. But, fortunately, many do still succeed in keeping them ... so let's all drink to that ... ~ Clive :)

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