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Wedding Veil

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                        gossamer laces

                   adorn the face of young love...

                        the veil of promise
                                   






a traditional haiku 5/7/5

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Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2012 at 11:10 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Joseph May

April 14, 2012 at 6:01 AM

congrats on your win Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 13, 2012 at 10:56 PM

congrats on another awesome win Carrie..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2012 at 10:18 PM

Carrie, , a wonderful congratulations.. with this awesome poem * good night. :-) always~ PD

Deborah Burch

April 13, 2012 at 6:47 PM

Ahhhh, so sweeet...Congratulations on your win Carrie!! big hugs--love,deb

Sara Kendrick

April 13, 2012 at 5:56 PM

Very expressive and creative work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your work..Sara

Izzy Gumbo

November 10, 2009 at 8:58 AM

Perfection in a Brides Haiku! I love to read you Carrie, thanks for your visit and kind comments also. Hugs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 28, 2009 at 9:16 PM

thankxxx Carrie .. so glad u liked my World Series poem... my Yankees lost tonight but we'll get them tomorrow .. I enjoy writing about all subjects.. I totally love the way your placed your words in this haiku .. very savvy collection... so happy to be on the Soup with so many talented poets like u...looking forward to joining more contests too... Linda-Marie

Brandee Augustus

October 27, 2009 at 1:03 PM

I like your interpretation of the picture. I like how you humanized the falls. Congratulations on your win!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 24, 2009 at 7:13 PM

Dear Carrie, Congratulations on placing in Raul's Contest This Haiku definitely brings the picture to life Extrordinary Talent performed in YOUR Haiku Thank-YOU for YOUR many Gracious Comments Always...HG P.S. I have a computer again YOURS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 4:31 AM

Congratulations, Carrie, on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines on the Soup. (I thought for sure this haiku would do well when I read it the first time. You did great!!!) Smiles, DAS-J

Sue Mason

October 19, 2009 at 5:24 PM

Beautifully done, Carrie.

Marty Owens

October 19, 2009 at 9:16 AM

Congratulations on your win. They were all so beautiful...I'm glad I didn't have to judge..Marty

Adell Foster

October 18, 2009 at 8:35 PM

Congrats on your well deserved win in Raul's contest Carrie, :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

October 18, 2009 at 8:11 PM

I'm so INLOVE with this bride that i've put her in my FAV chamber! OVERWHELMING poetry. It's so perfect in all it's facets. LOVE the topic! FELICITATIONS! Carrie. Wish I had more to say, but i'm speechless.