Nette Onclaud Poet Dodoitsu

Wedding Rehearsal Woes

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nerves crack a week before vows,          
   pre-nup dinners get mixed-up,
       groom’s tuxedo needs revamp…
          best man churns new speech!


from bride’s nth hairstyle redo
   to choir revisions; why do
      rehearsals take more days than …
         the five-hour wedding?




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*hour has one syllable
  hou-rs has two syllables

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for Dr. Ram's Wedding Rehearsals- Dodoitsu
by: nette onclaud

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Jack Horne May 18, 2011 at 7:55 AM Many congrats on both your beautiful wins, Nette : )

Nette Onclaud May 18, 2011 at 7:34 AM oh my, my entry didn;t get lost.. congrats to the soup settings, lol..:)

Tahera Mannan May 18, 2011 at 6:15 AM I wonder why too. perhaps then the wedding goes so smooth. Many congrats luv for this win.

Gautami Phookan May 18, 2011 at 2:57 AM Always a sheer delight ,reading your outstanding work.Congrats nette on your fabulous win, love, gautami

Andrea Dietrich May 17, 2011 at 10:22 PM Hey, very nice. And I don't think I ever saw this one yet. I really liked it, Nette. congratulations on your win.

John Freeman May 17, 2011 at 5:17 PM Excellent entry Nette, congratulations on taking Third place. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song May 17, 2011 at 5:17 PM All I can hear in the background is...dum dum dee dum.....dum dum dee dum....hear comes the pride...ha ha. Congrats on your winning write! Are u writing this from personal experience? Smiles Nette! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi May 17, 2011 at 5:16 PM ;) you tell um "poetic-license!" don't remember having a rehearsal? Congrad's Light! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire May 17, 2011 at 1:53 PM Nette, congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2011 at 1:05 PM Congrats Nette luv on another amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem .. amazing as always my friend.. enjoy another treasured win with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown May 17, 2011 at 12:40 PM Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Nette. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2011 at 11:52 AM Congratulatrions on the third place win in my contest, nette

Anne Rutherford May 2, 2011 at 12:29 PM Wow Nette you are very creative , this is awesome work. getting to know my way around the site . love seeing all the new'to me' poets. A great place to be . Anne

Gautami Phookan April 29, 2011 at 11:18 AM Enjoyed this excellent write. very interesting take on wedding rehearsal.Good luck in the contest.luv, gautami

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2011 at 6:05 PM Soup Mail in a few luv..

Carolyn Devonshire April 28, 2011 at 4:10 PM This is just what it's like, Nette. Everything seems to go crazy at the last minute -- all in preparing for a short ceremony and reception. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels April 28, 2011 at 9:29 AM This is so true Nette hehe, enjoyed it tonight.. Good luck for the contest *hugs* ;) W

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2011 at 5:51 AM going to post my entry for Paula in a few ..hope u would critique it for me luv.. thankxx...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 28, 2011 at 5:51 AM Oh so true Nette my dear ... for a few hours such chaos reigns..and sometimes funny but mostly serious stuff ... everyone all bent out of shape over little trifles and a long life ahead to be upset before the event.. great piece luv.. good luck in the contest ... awesome as always sweets...

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2011 at 5:41 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one..It is sad to have terrible things happen on such a wonderful event in one's life..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..I could feel that you felt the emotion with which I had written it...Sara

Joyce Johnson April 27, 2011 at 11:30 PM And I forgot to comment. This is reeally cute and accurate diescription. Love, Joyce

Joyce Johnson April 27, 2011 at 11:29 PM Just found out I won with you. Thank you so much and it was fun. I can't seem to keep up with the contests the comments, the thank yous. Every time I turn it on there is another contest and I had the job of writing a poem for our state publication today. So I was busy with that. Lovi, Joyce

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2011 at 8:05 PM A wonderful poem Nette, and good thinking on the question... lol... I think things longer when we want to get it right... and once we are there we want to get it over with... good luck... in the contest... p.d.