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Wedding Rehearsal Woes

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nerves crack a week before vows,          
   pre-nup dinners get mixed-up,
       groom’s tuxedo needs revamp…
          best man churns new speech!


from bride’s nth hairstyle redo
   to choir revisions; why do
      rehearsals take more days than …
         the five-hour wedding?




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*hour has one syllable
  hou-rs has two syllables

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for Dr. Ram's Wedding Rehearsals- Dodoitsu
by: nette onclaud

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 5/18/2011 7:55:00 AM Many congrats on both your beautiful wins, Nette : ) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/18/2011 7:34:00 AM oh my, my entry didn;t get lost.. congrats to the soup settings, lol..:) Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 5/18/2011 6:15:00 AM I wonder why too. perhaps then the wedding goes so smooth. Many congrats luv for this win. Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/18/2011 2:57:00 AM Always a sheer delight ,reading your outstanding work.Congrats nette on your fabulous win, love, gautami Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/17/2011 10:22:00 PM Hey, very nice. And I don't think I ever saw this one yet. I really liked it, Nette. congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/17/2011 5:17:00 PM Excellent entry Nette, congratulations on taking Third place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/17/2011 5:17:00 PM All I can hear in the background is...dum dum dee dum.....dum dum dee dum....hear comes the pride...ha ha. Congrats on your winning write! Are u writing this from personal experience? Smiles Nette! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 5/17/2011 5:16:00 PM ;) you tell um "poetic-license!" don't remember having a rehearsal? Congrad's Light! Light & Love Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/17/2011 1:53:00 PM Nette, congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/17/2011 1:05:00 PM Congrats Nette luv on another amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem .. amazing as always my friend.. enjoy another treasured win with luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/17/2011 12:40:00 PM Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Nette. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/17/2011 11:52:00 AM Congratulatrions on the third place win in my contest, nette Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 5/2/2011 12:29:00 PM Wow Nette you are very creative , this is awesome work. getting to know my way around the site . love seeing all the new'to me' poets. A great place to be . Anne Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/29/2011 11:18:00 AM Enjoyed this excellent write. very interesting take on wedding rehearsal.Good luck in the contest.luv, gautami Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/28/2011 6:05:00 PM Soup Mail in a few luv.. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/28/2011 4:10:00 PM This is just what it's like, Nette. Everything seems to go crazy at the last minute -- all in preparing for a short ceremony and reception. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/28/2011 9:29:00 AM This is so true Nette hehe, enjoyed it tonight.. Good luck for the contest *hugs* ;) W Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/28/2011 5:51:00 AM Oh so true Nette my dear ... for a few hours such chaos reigns..and sometimes funny but mostly serious stuff ... everyone all bent out of shape over little trifles and a long life ahead to be upset before the event.. great piece luv.. good luck in the contest ... awesome as always sweets... Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/28/2011 5:51:00 AM going to post my entry for Paula in a few ..hope u would critique it for me luv.. thankxx... Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/28/2011 5:41:00 AM Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one..It is sad to have terrible things happen on such a wonderful event in one's life..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..I could feel that you felt the emotion with which I had written it...Sara Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/27/2011 11:30:00 PM And I forgot to comment. This is reeally cute and accurate diescription. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 4/27/2011 11:29:00 PM Just found out I won with you. Thank you so much and it was fun. I can't seem to keep up with the contests the comments, the thank yous. Every time I turn it on there is another contest and I had the job of writing a poem for our state publication today. So I was busy with that. Lovi, Joyce Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/27/2011 8:05:00 PM A wonderful poem Nette, and good thinking on the question... lol... I think things longer when we want to get it right... and once we are there we want to get it over with... good luck... in the contest... p.d. Login to Reply