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Wedding Rehearsal

Ah, groom is drinking saki . Bride to be is having tea. Both parents having headaches. Kimono’s moving. The bride’s ankles are swollen. The groom pours bit more saki. Ancestors, all are happy. Soon, there will be three. Poet:Debbie Guzzi

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/18/2011 7:49:00 AM

Lovely wrire, Debbie. Many congrats on your top spot win : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 7:26:00 AM

yeeeow, enchanting as it has a unique take, debs... smashing congrats to you! :) huggs!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2011 6:19:00 AM

Naw LUCKY bride he loves her, he marries her, they have a baby! LUCKY everyone!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/18/2011 6:07:00 AM

Poor bride. Many congrats deb for this top win.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/18/2011 2:12:00 AM

Nice sweet dodoitsus here..Congrats Debbie on your win in Dr Ram's contest.Love, gautami

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 10:14:00 PM

This is MOST deserving of a first place. I love love love it! congratulations on your win.

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2011 5:10:00 PM

Excellent entry Debbie, congratulations on taking first place. Agape, Moses

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/17/2011 4:36:00 PM

I am gonna chime in with Miss Carrie...excellent illustration of the cart before the horse. Nice twist ...full of emotion...I can individually pull out each character of this poem and imagine what he/she is thinking during this event. As Donna Summer sang back in the 80's Hot Stuff!! Gwendolen

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/17/2011 1:51:00 PM

Loved this the first reading!! Seems to be happening a lot these days....cart before the horse (babe before the vows!)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 1:50:00 PM

Deb, congratulations on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 1:01:00 PM

Super Congrats Debbie on your first place win in Dr. Ram's contest with this dynamic and wonderful write ... enjoy as I am honored to be sharing first place with one of the best poetesses on the Soup..luv..

Shani Fassbender

Date: 5/17/2011 12:50:00 PM

This is absolutely wonderful - love it! Well deserved first place!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Brenda Atry

Date: 5/17/2011 12:17:00 PM

Debbie..I laughed out loud! I work for a Korean company and can visualize the entire scene. Winderful! Congratulations on your placement in this contest. You deserve it! Warmest regards, Brenda Atry

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 11:48:00 AM

Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Debbie

Kash Poet

Date: 4/27/2011 7:09:00 PM

Absolutely stunning---kash

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/25/2011 2:14:00 PM

Got a great chuckle out of this one, Deb. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Took your hint (if it was a hint) and entered the poem in your contest. A lot of free verse poems seem to be written in stream of consciousness. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 9:38:00 PM

Hello, D.G. nice... yes three makes a happy family.. lol.. i got to many.. so i passed up on happiness..lol... joke.. had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2011 4:29:00 PM

oh, my, this is a theme I wanted to do. I better stop reading anymore before I see all my ideas are already taken. haha. Good one, Deb. I am loving these little wedding rehersal poems.

Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2011 2:21:00 PM

Debbie this is so sweet and cute, I just loved it! ~~

Shani Fassbender

Date: 4/23/2011 12:08:00 PM

Oh my, a twist on a "shotgun wedding?" Love it, my dear! Shani

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2011 2:57:00 PM

LOVE IT!! (Kimono moving is hysterical!!)

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 4/22/2011 2:17:00 PM

Nice one. Enjoyed this :o)