Wedding Night

WEDDING NIGHT

The sex of the night they did wed,
At inkling, like butter on bread.
Then gymnast caused blush -
The blood it did rush.
How hard it was standing on head.

8/12/2019

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Allison Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 2:53 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 9:23 AM
Oh my! Great limerick, Kim. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 12:31 PM
lol....thanks, Kim!
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 3:52 AM
Lol, great fun Kim, congrats. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:29 AM
Thank you, Gary!
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 8:17 PM
a very original one, Kim, good naughty fun. Congrats in my contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 10:05 PM
LOL! Thanks, Andrea! Hugs and friendship...Kim
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:13 PM
I am standing on my head re-reading it, Kim. I am thinking "pole dance"? Ha!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 11:16 PM
LOL, Caren!
Poetry Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 1:17 AM
Each case is a case ... this one written here was funny ... On the night night of my wedding nothing happened, but early in the morning we made love until I lost my mind... congrats dear Kim... salute alkas
Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Wow! Love that comment...lol! Salute!
Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:50 PM
Bottoms up!! LOL. Here's to a win, Kim! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 9:21 PM
And now, congrats on your winner in the contest. I 'hardly' know what to say. Ahem. :) gw
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 8:18 PM
I looked again, and Oh my! I just got the last line. 'Hardy-har-hard! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:58 PM
LOL! Thanks, Gershon!
Romios Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 5:27 PM
You kill me..hope you win! Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:28 PM
LOL! Thanks, Panagiota!
Callus Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Oh lol...Kim!! I seem to have an inkling of what you're talking about!! Thank you for the laugh. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 2:29 PM
So glad you enjoyed :)
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 1:34 PM
- A wedding night to remember, Kim :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 2:30 PM
For sure! Hugs!
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:50 AM
Haha nice one kim, just finishing mine, if stars appear I might have to edit lol. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 2:31 PM
LOL...will check it out.
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:16 AM
oooh err Kim lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:24 AM
LOL, Jan!
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