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Wedding Miracle

grapes inhale sunshine
grow fat and plump on raindrops
sweet drink for fine meal

grapes inhale sunshine
grow fat and plump on raindrops
fine gift for sweet girl

grapes inhale sunshine
grow fat and plump on raindrops
Wedding miracle


©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/16/2013 6:39:00 AM
I miss the miracle?
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Date: 5/16/2013 8:07:00 AM
Soup mail
Date: 5/15/2013 10:01:00 PM
If this is a song, the Welch company can use it to advertise their grape products.
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Date: 5/16/2013 8:06:00 AM
Ahhhh..thanks Robert.....
Date: 5/15/2013 9:42:00 PM
I love grapes! Especially huge, seedless Red grapes. I like the flow of these Haikus. The last one made me smile. :)
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Date: 5/16/2013 8:08:00 AM
Very SWEET Drake....
Date: 5/15/2013 4:18:00 PM
Very lovely... I always thought writing a Haiku is so difficult... but it seems it is one of your skills.
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Date: 5/15/2013 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much....I'm really just learning...but find it challenging...
Date: 5/15/2013 10:34:00 AM
Love this, Donna, sure would be a winner, Harry,
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Date: 5/15/2013 4:02:00 PM
Harry I went in and added I removed this to make it more clear...and so people would know you thought it was disqualified...sorry about the misunderstanding...it just goes to show what a true friend you are to us all.....
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:53:00 PM
Glad you liked it Harry, thanks...my fault..I put my name out of habit...I voluntarily took it out....you are kind in your comment..thank you so much...
Date: 5/15/2013 9:55:00 AM
Absolutely, i love and enjoy this sooo much my dear friend Donna. How I wish you will reenter this in the contest. It's a winner for sure. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit on my poem. I am so sorry for the delayed reply because I was home for almost 2wks. Now, I'm back to my borrowed home. Million thanks for your inspiring comments and sharing your precious gem. Have a great day! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:56:00 PM
Well good to have you back...safe and sound...I look forward to your next wonderful work...
Date: 5/15/2013 7:21:00 AM
Would have been a winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your continued support of my work encourages me..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2013 3:56:00 PM
Thanks Sara ..likewise!
Date: 5/14/2013 5:13:00 PM
Ohhh I like this.. the repeating lines add impact to the cut line. Good job !!
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:23:00 PM
Good to see ya Debra ...and thanks so much....have a great day...
Date: 5/14/2013 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful poem on sweet tasty grapes. Thanks a lot for your kind visit to my write. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:24:00 PM
And you too sir....glad you enjoyed...have a nice evening...
Date: 5/14/2013 8:22:00 AM
Too bad about the contest... I like the repeat of the body of each haiku, with emphasis on the cutting line. Nice work! Jack
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Date: 5/14/2013 8:26:00 PM
I consider it an honor to have your input Jack...thanks....these are like my seventh ones I think...something like that...just learning haiku...they are addictive!
Date: 5/14/2013 2:31:00 AM
I thought this was kind of an odd contest so I couldn't come up with something... lol! The wedding miracle line was unexpected, which was nice. I never knew there was so many different ways one could express a grape, but it's enjoyable reading everyone's entry. It's unfortunate about the name thing, but I don't think anyone would call you "unfair" for doing so... just my thoughts.
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:41:00 AM
Thanks...but I gotta go with my gut...I know he has already read it...he told me.
Date: 5/13/2013 10:30:00 PM
donna, just take your name off!! If the contest has not been judged yet, maybe the judge never noticed. I often do not take a look at my entries until the contest has totally closed out. Did this contest already close? Anyway, I think it would do well in the contest. don't take it out if the contest is still going on. Just remove your name!
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Date: 5/14/2013 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea....soup mail...
Date: 5/13/2013 8:41:00 PM
Hello Donna, a very nice toast... i like the 3rd one the most... xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:10:00 PM
Hi Linda ..so good to see you! Me too..thus the title...some people probably wonder what I'm talking about...then again maybe not...thanks so much for your kind visit...
Date: 5/13/2013 12:44:00 PM
- Love it, Donna! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2013 12:55:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise...:-)
Date: 5/13/2013 10:22:00 AM
a keeper this one, donna.. fascinating string of kus.. my, this is a winner in my list!,,:)
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Date: 5/13/2013 12:59:00 PM
:-) well knowing friends enjoy it is what matters...thanks nette....
Date: 5/13/2013 7:06:00 AM
I enjoyed it very much. I am sure it would be a winner. I would resubmit without your name on it. What do you have to lose? In the end it's up to Freddie if he wishes to not choose it. Either way, it is well done.
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Richard...I saw Alfred had commented on it and I don't think it would be right for me to leave it in...but glad you liked it....
Date: 5/13/2013 5:15:00 AM
This is beautiful, MD! I believe it will go all the way to the top! :) Love ya!
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Eileen.....but I took it out of the contest....I out of habit put my name on it and it wouldn't be right to leaveit in after aAlfred read it....:-)
Date: 5/13/2013 2:59:00 AM
And sure winner. Take care my friend. Rick
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Rick...
Date: 5/13/2013 2:26:00 AM
Love those grapes, I'm with Bacchus.
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:22:00 AM
:-) yeah! Thanks...
Date: 5/12/2013 10:25:00 PM
Beautiful, this is a superior and tenderly wondrous write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening! You have masterfully crafted a phenomenal piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/13/2013 9:24:00 AM
Thank you an awful lot Russell......