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Wedding Day Disaster Footle

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My dress...
a mess

6th August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 10/10/2015 2:22:00 PM
Now this is a video that no one could dream up. Blimey, I hope a past boyfriend hasn't trained his dog. I'm trying so hard not to laugh and behave. If this happened to Olive, I'd be mortified ~ hugs//James xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2015 2:31:00 PM
ha ha ha love the comment James - just a warning - no dogs at your wedding ok!!! hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/9/2015 1:24:00 AM
hahahaha bad doggy, good poem xoxo
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2015 1:29:00 AM
I shouldn't smile but I do when I see the clip:-) thanks for the lovely comment - by the way you have a beautiful name Aurore:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2015 7:08:00 AM
Her wedding dress/ A mess/ for the dog she forgot/ To caress! Excellent dear Jean!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/7/2015 7:15:00 AM
I DO, Jan!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 7:10:00 AM
You have to feel sory for the poor woman Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/7/2015 6:37:00 AM
Oh, Jan, What a creative footle! and I loved the picture. A 7.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 7:09:00 AM
Thanks Darlene I found the clip and I had to do a poem - usually it works the other way round - I write then find an image:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/7/2015 4:15:00 AM
- .... one day (dog) she never forgets :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 4:20:00 AM
You have to feel so sorry for the poor woman:-( eww the smell of doggy pee not quite what you want on yoiur wedding day:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/7/2015 4:03:00 AM
He He He. LOL. FANTASTIC what a fab wedding vid to show the kids in ten years!!! Love Shanexxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 4:09:00 AM
I don't know... if it was the groom holding the dogs... they may not have got past the honeymoon lol - got to be the worst scenario - you have to feel so sorry for her:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 11:17:00 PM
lol! can;t help feeling sorry for the girl though...:-)))
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 2:12:00 AM
Oh I agree Kim - it is the reaction of the people standing behind her that makes me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 10:51:00 PM
My groom.... is doomed
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 2:11:00 AM
LOL Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 9:03:00 PM
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 2:09:00 AM
It has not arrived yet Mary:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 7:15:00 PM
ha! great video and poem to match!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/7/2015 2:08:00 AM
Thanks Ilene - you have to feel for the poor bride but when I saw the clip I had to do a little ditty:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 6:15:00 PM
This is really great, Jan. Love that funny little video. I think just saying "a mess" would sound better!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2015 6:16:00 PM
I toyed with that word .. will change it thanks:-0 hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/6/2015 6:04:00 PM
oh gee...dog pee....love the video
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2015 6:07:00 PM
ha ha ha Tim - love it - I like the reaction of the people directly behind her ... i do love the fun footle form:-) hugs Jan xx
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