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Wedding Day Disaster Footle

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My dress...
a mess

6th August 2015
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Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Now this is a video that no one could dream up. Blimey, I hope a past boyfriend hasn't trained his dog. I'm trying so hard not to laugh and behave. If this happened to Olive, I'd be mortified ~ hugs//James xx
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 2:31 PM
ha ha ha love the comment James - just a warning - no dogs at your wedding ok!!! hugs Jan xx
Severo Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:24 AM
hahahaha bad doggy, good poem xoxo
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 1:29 AM
I shouldn't smile but I do when I see the clip:-) thanks for the lovely comment - by the way you have a beautiful name Aurore:-) Hugs Jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:08 AM
Her wedding dress/ A mess/ for the dog she forgot/ To caress! Excellent dear Jean!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:15 AM
I DO, Jan!
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:10 AM
You have to feel sory for the poor woman Demetrios:-) hugs jan xx
Gifford Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 6:37 AM
Oh, Jan, What a creative footle! and I loved the picture. A 7.
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 7:09 AM
Thanks Darlene I found the clip and I had to do a poem - usually it works the other way round - I write then find an image:-) hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:15 AM
- .... one day (dog) she never forgets :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:20 AM
You have to feel so sorry for the poor woman:-( eww the smell of doggy pee not quite what you want on yoiur wedding day:-( hugs Jan xx
Cooper Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:03 AM
He He He. LOL. FANTASTIC what a fab wedding vid to show the kids in ten years!!! Love Shanexxx
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 4:09 AM
I don't know... if it was the groom holding the dogs... they may not have got past the honeymoon lol - got to be the worst scenario - you have to feel so sorry for her:-( hugs jan xx
Nunez Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 11:17 PM
lol! can;t help feeling sorry for the girl though...:-)))
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:12 AM
Oh I agree Kim - it is the reaction of the people standing behind her that makes me smile:-) hugs jan xx
Vaso Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 10:51 PM
My groom.... is doomed
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:11 AM
LOL Arthur:-) hugs Jan xx
Rotman Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 9:03 PM
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Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:09 AM
It has not arrived yet Mary:-( hugs jan xx
Bauer Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 7:15 PM
ha! great video and poem to match!
Allison Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Thanks Ilene - you have to feel for the poor bride but when I saw the clip I had to do a little ditty:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:15 PM
This is really great, Jan. Love that funny little video. I think just saying "a mess" would sound better!
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:16 PM
I toyed with that word .. will change it thanks:-0 hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:04 PM
oh gee...dog pee....love the video
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 6:07 PM
ha ha ha Tim - love it - I like the reaction of the people directly behind her ... i do love the fun footle form:-) hugs Jan xx
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