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Wedding Chaos

Poetry form: Hexasonnetta

Able baker began Biggest affair ever Displayed downtown never Drinking champagne again During desert best man's Finger, he did sever Featured flowers hurting Husband's increased adverse Effects, fainted, inversed His calm nature skirting ER person alerting Finger saved by a nurse Baker now basket case Budget affairs showcase
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Daniel Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 1:43 AM
A sure chaotic story, Sara, thanks for the laughs:)
Kendrick Avatar
May 16, 2026 at 5:16 AM
I am delighted that you got some laughs because laughter is the best medicine. Thanks for the time spent here, Joanna. SK
DiMino Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Now that is a wedding to remember. I have heard of Finger Pastries, but this was too much dedication. Delightful read.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:36 PM
Got that correct, Joe. Thank you for the added humor to my page. Sara K.
Poet Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Amusing mayhem! After enduring "the more dire," the spouse and bride are finally ready to move on to the "optimum" phase of their lives.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 10:13 AM
Lasaad, don't we all hope so for the bride and groom. Thank you for the nice and understanding review. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 5:12 AM
Hilarious chaos! Husband went through “the worse,” now maybe he and his bride can get to the “better” part.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 10:11 AM
Kim, I am sure that was a hard experience for the bride and groom plus everyone else involved. Your visit added a special touch. Sara K.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 2:32 AM
I consider it a fun poem. Happened sometimes, but then, such is life.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Yes, life gives us some difficulties sometimes, but God helps us through them to the other side where maybe there is an awesome view. Sara K.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Uh oh, sounds very upsetting! Weddings can be chaotic, but this one takes the cake!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:50 AM
BJ, I like your pun which made me smile. Thanks for the humor. Sara K.
George Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:59 PM
Quite a mishap... not one but a series. The poem made me smile.
Kendrick Avatar
May 14, 2026 at 3:49 AM
Delightful that you got a smile, Valsa. Your visits make me smile. Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 3:56 PM
That's an amusing one, Sara. What inspired you to use hexasonneta? It is my invented form and I have not seen anybody do one in a long time. Thanks for using that form.
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 4:53 PM
Well, it is a long story, Andrea. Someone read one of my very old poems which was a hexasonneta. The reason I wrote it back then was for a contest, in which I did not place so I thought I would try to write another one. I just don't do meter very well, but I tried anyway. LOL..Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
Rodgers Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 8:39 AM
Dear Sara, such a fun, runaway energy to it, like the whole wedding is tilting sideways and you’re just keeping pace with the rhyme. I like how the hexasonnetta form tightens the chaos instead of containing it; the finger mishap, the fainting, the nurse swooping in… A charming little tumble of a poem. Blessings, Sara, Daniel
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 2:32 PM
Why, thank you, Daniel. I am delighted you liked it. Your blessings are uplifting. You saying it was a fun poem made my day. Sara K
Kamoonpuri Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 3:16 AM
Woah a wedding gone wrong and upsetted. You narrated it superly in new form. Thumbs up! >>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<~~~\\\¤¤¤««««»»»»»» Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:18 AM
S.Zaynab, your visit was encouraging. Thanks..Sara K.
Empress Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 2:17 AM
Gosh what a scene! Very well written dear Sara! Also goes well with the picture too. I love the way it flows and also how it made me smile somehow! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:17 AM
Yes, IE, making you smile was not easy as this work is kind of confusing. I was trying to get the unstressed, stressed meter that is supposed to be and that is very hard for me. LOL..Sara K.
Vaso Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 10:25 PM
LOL made me smile!!!!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:15 AM
Arthur, I am glad the reading put some cheer in your life. Sara K.
Rolland Avatar
May 12, 2026 at 4:55 PM
this is excellent, when i was younger, marriage didn't work, i never tried again, your words are so musical, loved the alliterations, thanks poet Sara
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2026 at 5:14 AM
Yann, I'm saddened to learn that your marriage did not work out, because sometimes a failure like that can help a person look inward and see what might have been wrong that needs to be corrected and look at the person chosen to see where they played a part. Anyway, you still are alive, and you might find the person that fits you like a glove. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K
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