Wedding Breakdowns

the  joys of marriage become memorable with unforseen breakdowns


Late night frolicking and teasing continued
Dancing and music lasted till early hours
With a beating heart and ignited nerves 
I lay nervously on bed wondering what lay ahead 

My groom arrived with a garlanded brow
Our marriage was performed with religious fervour
While the priest read out our marriage obligations
We walked in tow four times around the holy book

Family pressures had made my groom suspicious
Whether it was really me or else behind the veil
He bent and peeped lifting the veil slightly
Much to the chagrin of the priest and mirth for family

After the family lunch we drove down to his home in another city
His car broke down for a breather on an isolated road
My groom romanced on the ground beneath his car in the summer heat
While I all decked and drenched, bent down to observe him in greasy repair 

In final disparity of three breakdowns we ultimately reached home
Bathed and refreshed we were having a lovey-dovey talk
When there was a loud bang, we opened the door to find a smiling friend,
He was unable to reach the marriage venue as his car had broken down!


March 24, 2016
Contest: My Wedding Day Is Special 
Sponsor: Olive Eloisa Guillermore


*  reference to a Sikh marriage
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Negron Flores Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful poem. My best wishes for the contest.
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