Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

Web Spinner

Giant spider, climbing up the spout
Downward it tripped right on my pillow...
I croaked and rattled a loudest shout,
And glue-stick couldn't rid its long toes.

As thorax clung on the bedside wall
Spinning a web, a bold fight did dare
Wired mouth sprawled, I wanted to fall
But with my toy gun, war we declared.

I’ll pulp them eyes till the neck-bone drops
Spurting water on vile insect's tricks,
Until cape flings like a hero’s props...
It's Spiderman from Marvel comics!

Debbie Guzzi's Monsters and Marvels Contest
nette onclaud

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Muhammad Safa Thajudeen November 5, 2014 at 7:37 PM Very interesting.I have composed a poem to enter the competition sponsored by you looking at a water fall.This poem is already included in the soup under the title "Shedding stones".i don't know how to enter this poem to the competition sponsored by you.please help me.Thanks. -Safa

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 23, 2014 at 3:31 AM I am arachnophobiac.It's difficult to cool out after reading the poem.God spiders real monsters. I prefer snakes even. nette, aren't you scared of webspinners/wolf-spiders?

Brenda Meier-Hans October 14, 2014 at 10:26 PM Now who doesn't love Spiderman. Brilliant Nette. Congratulations on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 14, 2014 at 9:51 PM Well crafted poem, nette, congrats on the win

Jan Allison October 14, 2014 at 12:16 PM Dropping by with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx

Justin Bordner October 11, 2014 at 6:00 PM Spiderman, hybrid of silk and steel. You write with the venom of a villain and the dash of a hero Nette...J.A.B.

Jack Horne October 11, 2014 at 3:03 PM this is great fun - love it - and love Spiderman x

Noel Onat October 11, 2014 at 1:18 PM Heehee. Spiderman turned into a nursery-like adventure. This is so imaginative and freakin' good, Nette.

Tim Smith October 11, 2014 at 12:45 PM Very fun and enjoyable...a little mint will do the trick...hugs Tim

Liam Mcdaid October 11, 2014 at 10:13 AM really very beautifully spun excellent piece nette

Jan Allison October 11, 2014 at 8:35 AM great imagery Nette - am not fond of spiders but you made this fun:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance October 11, 2014 at 7:05 AM Fun images I can imagine a kid with a water gun and over exaggerated movements during this chase. Well said :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2014 at 6:40 AM - I just vacuumed the whole house no spiders or spider webs - Wishing you a beautiful weekend ..... :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)