Web Spinner

Giant spider, climbing up the spout Downward it tripped right on my pillow... I croaked and rattled a loudest shout, And glue-stick couldn't rid its long toes. As thorax clung on the bedside wall Spinning a web, a bold fight did dare Wired mouth sprawled, I wanted to fall But with my toy gun, war we declared. I’ll pulp them eyes till the neck-bone drops Spurting water on vile insect's tricks, Until cape flings like a hero’s props... It's Spiderman from Marvel comics! Debbie Guzzi's Monsters and Marvels Contest nette onclaud

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Date: 11/5/2014 7:37:00 PM
Very interesting.I have composed a poem to enter the competition sponsored by you looking at a water fall.This poem is already included in the soup under the title "Shedding stones".i don't know how to enter this poem to the competition sponsored by you.please help me.Thanks. -Safa
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Date: 10/23/2014 3:31:00 AM
I am arachnophobiac.It's difficult to cool out after reading the poem.God spiders real monsters. I prefer snakes even. nette, aren't you scared of webspinners/wolf-spiders?
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Date: 10/14/2014 10:26:00 PM
Now who doesn't love Spiderman. Brilliant Nette. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:51:00 PM
Well crafted poem, nette, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:16:00 PM
Dropping by with my congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:00:00 PM
Spiderman, hybrid of silk and steel. You write with the venom of a villain and the dash of a hero Nette...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/11/2014 3:03:00 PM
this is great fun - love it - and love Spiderman x
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Date: 10/11/2014 1:18:00 PM
Heehee. Spiderman turned into a nursery-like adventure. This is so imaginative and freakin' good, Nette.
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Date: 10/11/2014 12:45:00 PM
Very fun and enjoyable...a little mint will do the trick...hugs Tim
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Date: 10/11/2014 10:13:00 AM
really very beautifully spun excellent piece nette
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Date: 10/11/2014 8:35:00 AM
great imagery Nette - am not fond of spiders but you made this fun:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/11/2014 7:05:00 AM
Fun images I can imagine a kid with a water gun and over exaggerated movements during this chase. Well said :)
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:40:00 AM
- I just vacuumed the whole house no spiders or spider webs - Wishing you a beautiful weekend ..... :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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