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Weave

"Oh what a tangled web we weave, when we practice to deceive." Shakespeare


WEAVE
A web
Wind silk taunt

Sticky design hung
I'll oblige and walk in
Then try to get it off fast

"Another woven lie in which I'm trapped."     

wind pronounced as in the line "I will wind a ball of yarn"

Written: April 25, 2023
Sponsor: Constance
Contest: Writing Challenge W Words
Form: Clarifying Pyramid

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Sam Kauffman Date: 5/11/2023 10:09:00 AM Subtle danger so eloquently expressed, Sara. Wonderful take on the theme! Congrats and high fives for your win! Blessings and prayers. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/11/2023 1:01:00 PM Sam, thank you for dropping by and letting me know I placed in the contest. I appreciate the congratulations and I definitely need blessings and prayers. Sara

J.W. Earnings Date: 5/8/2023 3:40:00 PM Clever and intellectually creative poem here! Thanks for sharing once again. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 5/9/2023 8:42:00 AM Your visits have added so much to the mood of my day. Thank you, Sara.

Nancy Kaufman Date: 4/28/2023 6:54:00 AM congratulations on your contest Sara, so wonderfully visual.. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/28/2023 7:38:00 AM I appreciate you stopping by, Nancy with congratulations. I am glad you see it as wonderfully visual. Sara

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/27/2023 4:26:00 PM love the idea in this one, Sara. Congrats on the win too Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2023 11:08:00 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you stopping by with congratulations. Sara

Constance La France Date: 4/27/2023 12:12:00 PM Sara, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations, I like the quotes too! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2023 1:24:00 PM Thank you, Constance for dropping by to let me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate you doing so. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/27/2023 6:45:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Sara :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2023 12:53:00 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Valsa George Date: 4/27/2023 6:29:00 AM When we tell lies, we are creating a sticky web in which we get trapped. A poem of great depth and wisdom. Congratulations dear Sara on your well deserved first place win. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2023 6:39:00 AM I agree wholeheartedly, but sometimes we tell those little white lies for societal purposes. LOL..Valsa, I appreciate your visit with congrats. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 4/26/2023 5:34:00 PM This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/27/2023 2:46:00 AM Lasaad, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Alexis Y. Date: 4/26/2023 2:50:00 PM WoW! Sara, You took the chosen word and composed a good poem. I agree with the message of your well-written write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day;-) Alexis Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2023 3:21:00 PM Alexis, Your comments have made my afternoon much brighter. Thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/26/2023 1:57:00 AM Falling into a web, not easy to escape. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2023 3:49:00 AM Victor, Yes, into a person's web of lies when one wants to believe in that person can be very difficult. Thanks for the visit and understanding. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 4/25/2023 6:03:00 PM Sara, you've crafted a beautiful verse. Your meticulous choice of metaphors and your flawless syntax provides a further dimension of elegance to the excellent verse you have written. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2023 3:44:00 AM Lasaad, Thank you for your comments and deep analysis of my lines. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/25/2023 3:45:00 PM we get tangled in our lies at times, well illustrated Sara Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/26/2023 3:40:00 AM Mystic, Yes, if we tell lies most of the time they will come back to haunt us especially if we tell them often, but there are people who can tell them and it doesn't bother them at all because they believe their own lies. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Daniel Turner Date: 4/25/2023 9:10:00 AM I like this one a lot, Mrs Sara. Im like you when I walk into one, Im trying as quickly as I can to get if off of me, at least my face anyway. Pleasure to read this little gem:) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/25/2023 2:38:00 PM Daniel, Yes, those webs are very unpleasant to say the least. Thanks for saying it was a pleasure to read and calling it a gem. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/25/2023 8:06:00 AM Few words with much said. "Powerful" Shakespeare had it right. So True... Have a blessed day writing away................. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/25/2023 2:33:00 PM Paula, I believe he did on that point anyway. Thanks for the blessing for this day. It wasn't a whole lot of writing going on though. A trip to the doctor for my husband. He's okay. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/25/2023 5:56:00 AM - Being caught in a lie is terrible, Sara - Great written in few words, best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 4/25/2023 7:55:00 AM Those that a chronic liars will not admit to the lie/s though. Thanks for your kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit today. Sara