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Weave

"Oh what a tangled web we weave, when we practice to deceive." Shakespeare


WEAVE
A web
Wind silk taunt

Sticky design hung
I'll oblige and walk in
Then try to get it off fast

"Another woven lie in which I'm trapped."     

wind pronounced as in the line "I will wind a ball of yarn"

Written: April 25, 2023
Sponsor: Constance
Contest: Writing Challenge W Words
Form: Clarifying Pyramid

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Sam Kauffman May 11, 2023 at 10:09 AM Subtle danger so eloquently expressed, Sara. Wonderful take on the theme! Congrats and high fives for your win! Blessings and prayers. Sara Kendrick May 11, 2023 at 1:01 PM Sam, thank you for dropping by and letting me know I placed in the contest. I appreciate the congratulations and I definitely need blessings and prayers. Sara

David William Breidenthal May 8, 2023 at 3:40 PM Clever and intellectually creative poem here! Thanks for sharing once again. Sara Kendrick May 9, 2023 at 8:42 AM Your visits have added so much to the mood of my day. Thank you, Sara.

Nancy Kaufman April 28, 2023 at 6:54 AM congratulations on your contest Sara, so wonderfully visual.. Sara Kendrick April 28, 2023 at 7:38 AM I appreciate you stopping by, Nancy with congratulations. I am glad you see it as wonderfully visual. Sara

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2023 at 4:26 PM love the idea in this one, Sara. Congrats on the win too Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 11:08 PM Why, thank you, Andrea. I appreciate you stopping by with congratulations. Sara

Constance La France April 27, 2023 at 12:12 PM Sara, thank you for sharing your wonderful poem with us in my Writing Challenge, congratulations, I like the quotes too! Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 1:24 PM Thank you, Constance for dropping by to let me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate you doing so. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2023 at 6:45 AM - Congratulations on your win, Sara :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 12:53 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise for dropping by with congratulations. Sara

Valsa George April 27, 2023 at 6:29 AM When we tell lies, we are creating a sticky web in which we get trapped. A poem of great depth and wisdom. Congratulations dear Sara on your well deserved first place win. Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 6:39 AM I agree wholeheartedly, but sometimes we tell those little white lies for societal purposes. LOL..Valsa, I appreciate your visit with congrats. Sara

Sotto Poet April 26, 2023 at 5:34 PM This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win. Sara Kendrick April 27, 2023 at 2:46 AM Lasaad, Thanks for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Alexis Y. April 26, 2023 at 2:50 PM WoW! Sara, You took the chosen word and composed a good poem. I agree with the message of your well-written write. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day;-) Alexis Sara Kendrick April 26, 2023 at 3:21 PM Alexis, Your comments have made my afternoon much brighter. Thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2023 at 1:57 AM Falling into a web, not easy to escape. Sara Kendrick April 26, 2023 at 3:49 AM Victor, Yes, into a person's web of lies when one wants to believe in that person can be very difficult. Thanks for the visit and understanding. Sara

Sotto Poet April 25, 2023 at 6:03 PM Sara, you've crafted a beautiful verse. Your meticulous choice of metaphors and your flawless syntax provides a further dimension of elegance to the excellent verse you have written. Sara Kendrick April 26, 2023 at 3:44 AM Lasaad, Thank you for your comments and deep analysis of my lines. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose April 25, 2023 at 3:45 PM we get tangled in our lies at times, well illustrated Sara Sara Kendrick April 26, 2023 at 3:40 AM Mystic, Yes, if we tell lies most of the time they will come back to haunt us especially if we tell them often, but there are people who can tell them and it doesn't bother them at all because they believe their own lies. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Daniel Turner April 25, 2023 at 9:10 AM I like this one a lot, Mrs Sara. Im like you when I walk into one, Im trying as quickly as I can to get if off of me, at least my face anyway. Pleasure to read this little gem:) Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 2:38 PM Daniel, Yes, those webs are very unpleasant to say the least. Thanks for saying it was a pleasure to read and calling it a gem. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Paula Goldsmith April 25, 2023 at 8:06 AM Few words with much said. "Powerful" Shakespeare had it right. So True... Have a blessed day writing away................. Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 2:33 PM Paula, I believe he did on that point anyway. Thanks for the blessing for this day. It wasn't a whole lot of writing going on though. A trip to the doctor for my husband. He's okay. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2023 at 5:56 AM - Being caught in a lie is terrible, Sara - Great written in few words, best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely day :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 7:55 AM Those that a chronic liars will not admit to the lie/s though. Thanks for your kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit today. Sara