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Weatherbound

Curiousity hovers in the air Peeking out of their cozy lair. Just close enough for them to touch The snow that falls in wanderlust. Snug together they share the light Which brightens faces with delight. Reaching out to touch a flake Harmony takes away all aches. Of the bitter cold that envelops them Night time closes, all is dim. Time stands still without a sound Feeling lost yet somehow found. The fur of their dog surrounds them Caught outside its sink or swim Yet hand and hand they laugh and play Under the snowy sky and stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/3/2014 7:36:00 PM
I love it!
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Date: 1/29/2014 12:50:00 PM
Off to a great start...congrats on your in and welcome. BG
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Date: 1/28/2014 8:38:00 PM
Love your approach to the theme and congrats on the win, Kristen
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Date: 1/28/2014 5:39:00 PM
nice picture painted Kirsten congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/28/2014 4:59:00 PM
Way to go with this great winner...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/28/2014 12:49:00 PM
I am honored, Kristen, that your first poem posted here should be for my contest. I am very pleased with it, and hope that more people will read and comment on it. It does sound very cozy and ethereal, like a moment in another world, quite peaceful too. Thank you very much for participating, and I congratulate you on your win!
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Date: 1/28/2014 2:32:00 AM
Welcome to this site. I know you will like it here. This is a nice gentle write that has you off to a good start here.
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Date: 1/16/2014 10:59:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Kristen- I choose your first beautiful poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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