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Weather Stained and Ravaged

~~*~~ And I am lost in a sea of sorrow, The drums of time never cease to be; Memories drop like pebbles in a well, And I have dreamt a sad dripping dream. The drums of time never cease to be, My life weather stained and ravaged; And I have dreamt a sad dripping dream, Curtains stir with the whispering past. The drums of time never cease to be, Memories drop like pebbles in a well; My life weather stained and ravaged, And I am lost in a sea of sorrow. _______________________ August 8, 2015 Pantoum - unrhymed For the contest, Your Best Poem With Metaphors Sponsor, Silent One Second Place

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Date: 8/10/2015 8:31:00 PM
Your songs always lead me into the purest emtions of truth, accompanied by visions unique to the language of your heart Wings of Fire...every sea reaches a place of wonder Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:27:00 PM
Kudos on the win. I love the form!
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:25:00 PM
BROKEN, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 8/10/2015 3:15:00 PM
Awesome use of metaphors !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2015 12:03:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful, BW. Never tried a Pantoum. Soupmail, pleeaaasse.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:26:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem broken! magnificent work!
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Date: 8/9/2015 5:17:00 PM
this is one wonderfully written pantoum, Constance. BIG congrats. Sadness done stunningly by Broken Wings!
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Date: 8/9/2015 10:11:00 AM
Wonderful poem a 7 Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:33:00 AM
I really liked this xoxo
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