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Weather Forecast

vain moon, changing phase
white cloak covers frozen days
‘til warm breeze whispers,
whether it be snow or rain,
weather will come, love or pain


01/16/2018

weathertanka

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Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2018 at 5:47 PM

hahaha, reading what you said about your five poem! Let me see what your latest and greatest might be.

Andrea Dietrich

January 18, 2018 at 7:25 PM

oh wow, how ingenious. You did the weather forecast contest as a tanka. I wish I'd thought of that. Hope you don't mind if I borrow the idea (for form, not content of course). Or maybe I should just try for etheree!! Love that end line on it.

James Inman

January 18, 2018 at 9:26 PM

Hi Andrea, how are you? Thanks for the nice comment. Can't wait to read yours. I haven't written an etheree for a while. As for the five letter contest. I deleted mine so you will never get a chance to read it and trust me when I say you should be happy about that. It was baaaadddd!