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vain moon, changing phase white cloak covers frozen days ‘til warm breeze whispers, whether it be snow or rain, weather will come, love or pain 01/16/2018

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Date: 2/6/2018 5:47:00 PM
hahaha, reading what you said about your five poem! Let me see what your latest and greatest might be.
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Date: 1/18/2018 7:25:00 PM
oh wow, how ingenious. You did the weather forecast contest as a tanka. I wish I'd thought of that. Hope you don't mind if I borrow the idea (for form, not content of course). Or maybe I should just try for etheree!! Love that end line on it.
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James Inman
Date: 1/18/2018 9:26:00 PM
Hi Andrea, how are you? Thanks for the nice comment. Can't wait to read yours. I haven't written an etheree for a while. As for the five letter contest. I deleted mine so you will never get a chance to read it and trust me when I say you should be happy about that. It was baaaadddd!
Date: 1/18/2018 7:23:00 PM
wish you could have finished your five letter words poem. Let me if you do, ok? Now I shall see your tanka.
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Date: 1/18/2018 7:52:00 AM
I can relate to this one. I like this special poem :)
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James Inman
Date: 1/18/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you for all of your visits and lovely comments today Heidi.
Date: 1/18/2018 12:13:00 AM
Charming. Good take on theme. Well done, James.
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James Inman
Date: 1/18/2018 7:06:00 AM
Thanks again Line.
Date: 1/16/2018 4:24:00 PM
I'ts one thing we have absolutely no control over James and we are constantly at its mercy day in day out - a lovely tanka:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Inman
Date: 1/16/2018 7:21:00 PM
I relate the weather to emotions, constantly changing. Thank you for the lovely comment Jan.
Date: 1/16/2018 4:09:00 PM
Great Tanka, James, nice imagery. // Barry
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James Inman
Date: 1/16/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thank you Barry

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