Weather Forecast

the night they met there was
a lot of atmospheric pressure
in which there was a lightning 
storm so bright that the entire 
city lit up as if fireworks 
were on display

thunder rolled in adding to the 
drama of two lonely people
sharing the same table waiting 
for the storm to be over as
they eyed one another and
liked what they saw

the evening was filled with 
electricity from the atmospheric 
pressure which both felt between
them as they drank their lattes
and introduced by fate 
as the storm continued

thirty years later they still remember
the night they met in which the 
storm of the century brought them
together as they sought shelter 
from the atmospheric pressure 
which played cupid



2/25/18

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Date: 5/3/2018 12:25:00 AM
Belated congrats on this lovely take on the weather challenge contest, Sonia.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 5/3/2018 7:53:00 AM
Line, thank you again for your encouragement. ~ Sonia
Date: 3/6/2018 10:15:00 PM
Very well narrated, Sonia. A most pleasant read. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Sonia Walker
Date: 3/6/2018 11:35:00 PM
Line, your congratulations is uplifting. Thank you, Sonia
Date: 2/27/2018 1:27:00 AM
A lovely story Sonia! When a couple is destined to meet it will happen when least expected. Congratulations on your wonderful win! ; )
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Sonia Walker
Date: 2/27/2018 9:42:00 AM
Connie, thank you for your positive and supportive comment on my poem. I am enjoying my cup of coffee as I am reading your kind reply. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 2/26/2018 5:39:00 AM
great metaphors in your poem! Filled with the imagery only love can create. beautiful! thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Date: 2/26/2018 10:23:00 AM
Luloo, thank you so much. Hugs, Sonia
Date: 1/31/2018 7:59:00 PM
Nice storytelling, Sonia - congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:09:00 PM
Agnes, it was definitely an electrifying storm. Thank you for commenting. ~ Sonia.
Date: 1/31/2018 8:24:00 AM
What a lovely romantic poem Sonia:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/31/2018 9:20:00 AM
Jan, your encouragement is sincerely appreciated. Hugs, Sonia.
Date: 1/31/2018 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on your second place, Sonia, and for entering my contest. Viv x
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Date: 1/31/2018 9:24:00 AM
Viv, you have brightened up my morning with the announcement of the placement of my poem. Thank you kindly, Sonia.
Date: 1/31/2018 12:23:00 AM
I love this sweet romantic poem Sonia! Congratulations on having it come in with second place! : )
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Sonia Walker
Date: 1/31/2018 9:34:00 AM
Connie, thank you for your glowing comment. Electricity and romance do have something in common. Sonia, all lit up.
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