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Weather Forecast - Twister Terror

"Weather Forecast - Twister Terror" twister touchdown twirling free black funnel cloud spins angrily wind crackling branches on bare trees neighborhoods in panic freeze ... beware windows and open doors take shelter as fierce rain downpours. destroying four homes in a row as lightening bolts ignite scary show rain cascading fast to slow as plants and patios endure blasts and blows ... beware windows and open doors take shelter as fierce rain downpours. as time elapsed the sunshine loomed and happy smiles had fully bloomed 'twas a close call from life to doomed but God's Almighty Power zoomed ... so everyone now cherished life no casualties to end twister strife. *For Joy Wellington's Weather Forecast Contest ...

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:31:00 AM

deep poem...~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

April Walter Skyy

Date: 10/8/2012 7:07:00 AM

Congrats on a 1st place win. I really enjoyed your poem.

Kim Merryman

Date: 10/7/2012 9:29:00 AM

Linda-Marie, congrats on your 1st place win! Great write! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/5/2012 10:15:00 PM

Awesome, Linda. Glad to see you in top form and a winner here. Congrats, sweetie (yes, I am seeing my grandkids tomorrow and all is well with them)

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/5/2012 8:43:00 PM

Awesome! Congratulations on this fabulous 1st place win! Cynthia

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/5/2012 7:29:00 PM

Dearest Linda..congrats on this fine piece being first place on the winners board. Your poem depicted just what I had in mind for my contest...well done! One love. Joy Wells.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/5/2012 3:04:00 PM

Awesome poem Linda Marie!...Congratulations!...Looks like my Saints are the Ain'ts this year...no sweat...got a feeling they're gonna get mad and start kicking some butts right outta the Superdome! Hope Eli and the G-Men make it again...tough division tho! - Tim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2012 1:00:00 PM

Great work that excels in the winners' list..Congrats on your win...Sara

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/5/2012 11:51:00 AM

Congratulations for a big win friend Linda-Marie. it's lovely write. cheers!! (^_^) **Maria**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2012 8:07:00 AM

LINDA, MY SWEET BFF, congratulations with your awesome "Weather Forecast" poem in Joy's contest... have yourself a good day :-) Love PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/5/2012 7:52:00 AM

won 1st place .. thankxxx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/5/2012 5:51:00 AM

Belated congratulations once again, I am sorry these are late I am busy packing and shopping for my holidays xx

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2012 5:32:00 AM

congrats on a smashing win Linda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2012 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joy's "Weather Forecast" contest Linda-Marie. Love Carol

Len Gasun

Date: 10/5/2012 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your fabulous win my dear Linda-Marie!!! hugs:) Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/5/2012 3:23:00 AM

Wow, what a wonderful win and a wonderful entry! Congratulations Linda.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 10/5/2012 3:09:00 AM

Congrats on your first place win in Joy's Weather Forecast! Lovely write!

Joseph May

Date: 9/10/2012 8:56:00 AM

great write Linda... I wrote mine the opposite way...best wishes...love...Joseph

Duncan Chappell

Date: 9/10/2012 6:45:00 AM

you just make your words flow so wonderful love always duncan ceizar xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:22:00 AM

Very nicely done, Linda. You went from scary to sunshiny happy!!! I wonder if I can use an oldie for this contest. I have one I think that fits the bill!! This is sure to do GREAT in the contest. Keep me posted on your hand surgery, etc.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:22:00 AM

oh, and I just read this was a true and recent story Wow.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/9/2012 6:25:00 PM

very powerful images here - i like the way you've described a tornado, which must be so frightening to experience. (there's a typo in the last word - thought you'd want to correct it).

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/9/2012 12:27:00 PM

This is a very illuminating write my friend! Lightning doesn't have a shot with the quality of this poem that you have written! You have written a fearful few stanzas Linda-Marie followed with a glorious new beginning stanza! This piece will do very well in the contest, I am impressed with the way you approached and rhymed this poem! Glorious Work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/9/2012 8:34:00 AM

wow, awesome descriptions of what must be a terrifying experience. Loved your part of our co-write xxx

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/9/2012 5:54:00 AM

Very well done, good job. Two thumbs up