Weather

Excellent. You captured 4 seasons and their moods in 4 stanzas with 4 lines through sensory descriptions of daily life and natural changes. I wouldn’t have thought of that. Clearly you condensed winter's cozy isolation, spring's rebirth, summer's heat, and autumn's quiet reflection. By repeating the word "weather" at the end of every line, you created a rhythmic cadence emphasizing how atmospheric shifts shape human feelings and behavior throughout the year. Great job, Alison. - Chris

Here weather comes before us in its diverse forms and shades... a delightful journey through different weather situations!

Congrats for this great piece. I love "Weather Poems". Great work.

nice, the weather sure doesn't influence our moods. here, today, it's enjoy an outdoor concert weather!

Alison, your writings are thought through. In the military we called this "adapt and overcome". In general, people adapt to emotional situations fairly well, although some don't. Sounds like an oxymoron, but it is true. People can choose to hide or celebrate - there is a right place in the life cycle of life.

Such is what must become the political weathering we are experiencing today! Let us continue striving for this kind of weather in human nature. For me, Alison, this was a deep allegorical weathering flow. Thanks for the share. One, Peace and Love, M'Lowe

Delightful walk through the seasons ~ charming

This is incredibly creative! I love how you used weather as the guise to emotional shifts. Faving this one!

The four Australian seasons (?) in four lovely verses with great use of repetition. “Ignore the world weather”…yes theres a lot of that about for sure at the moment. Cheers - Gary