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I tried to draw the attention of the disinterested God who builds the weather. “Send us snow - just a few feet make our Christmas fantasy complete” I pleaded, but she never interceded. Angels, that will-less posse of hers only seem to watch earth’s slaughter as the wind carries a warm disregard.

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Date: 1/4/2024 8:03:00 PM
like this one - clever rhyme play, w/darker-cynical undertones last stanza
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Date: 1/5/2024 8:19:00 AM
Yeah, I was in a dark mood then =]

Book: Reflection on the Important Things