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Weary Soul

Weary we are or at least that aspect of identity Considering itself to be separate from source Exhausted oscillating in the world of duality Encased in feeble form, relying on use of force All striving futile, elusive is joy in permanence Finally, void of cessation, our last resource In silence we cognise soft voice of conscience Gentle love pulsations emanating from heart We meld therein, reclaiming lost innocence A mist envelopes us as bliss ignition does start We are astonished to see ego urges vaporise Darkness dispelled, upon adding love to cart Ceasing to weigh and size, over time we realise We are not mere mind-body but love and light Viewing here soul ascent, in childlike surprise Oh weary hermit, awaken now to spherical sight Rapturous bliss delight, cascading day and night 23-November-2021 ''W'' New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win with your "Weary soul" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............
La France Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 1:54 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your First Place in in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderfully penned and I like the image used too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 9:54 AM
CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, uplifting poem, Unseeking Seeker. Janice
Seeker Avatar
November 27, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Janice!
Allison Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:18 AM
I feel at pea e reading your words, many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx
Seeker Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, Jan!:)
Y. Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:09 AM
WoW! Seeker, What a deep and well written verse. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Seeker Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 12:16 AM
Thank you Alexis!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on the first place. You handle poetic forms like Terza Rima so effortlessly. Your themes are deep and spiritual. I especially love the last stanza "Oh weary hermit, awaken now to spherical sight Rapturous bliss delight, cascading day and night". Warm wishes ~ Mala
Seeker Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 6:43 PM
Thanks Mala! Didn’t know the contest is judged. Must have a look at the entries soon
Krutsinger Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 11:10 PM
You are such a fantastic wordsmith. "We are not mere mind-body but love and light Viewing here soul ascent, in childlike surprise " Wow!
Seeker Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 11:50 PM
Happy you enjoyed, Caren!
Sands Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:27 AM
Very nice. I can feel peace :)
Seeker Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 3:36 AM
Thank you, Heidi!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 2:01 AM
A well done poem is deserving. Your terza rima is perfect.
Seeker Avatar
November 23, 2021 at 6:39 AM
Thank you Victor! I’m no expert, so I’ll take your word for it! :)
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