Weary Soul

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Weary we are or at least that aspect of identity Considering itself to be separate from source Exhausted oscillating in the world of duality Encased in feeble form, relying on use of force All striving futile, elusive is joy in permanence Finally, void of cessation, our last resource In silence we cognise soft voice of conscience Gentle love pulsations emanating from heart We meld therein, reclaiming lost innocence A mist envelopes us as bliss ignition does start We are astonished to see ego urges vaporise Darkness dispelled, upon adding love to cart Ceasing to weigh and size, over time we realise We are not mere mind-body but love and light Viewing here soul ascent, in childlike surprise Oh weary hermit, awaken now to spherical sight Rapturous bliss delight, cascading day and night 23-November-2021 ''W'' New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2021 8:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with your "Weary soul" write. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2021 1:54:00 PM

Seeker, congratulations on your First Place in in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderfully penned and I like the image used too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/27/2021 9:54:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, uplifting poem, Unseeking Seeker. Janice

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/27/2021 8:48:00 PM

Thank you, Janice!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2021 7:18:00 AM

I feel at pea e reading your words, many congratulations on your win, hugs jan xx

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/26/2021 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Jan!:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/26/2021 12:09:00 AM

WoW! Seeker, What a deep and well written verse. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/26/2021 12:16:00 AM

Thank you Alexis!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/25/2021 2:23:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place. You handle poetic forms like Terza Rima so effortlessly. Your themes are deep and spiritual. I especially love the last stanza "Oh weary hermit, awaken now to spherical sight Rapturous bliss delight, cascading day and night". Warm wishes ~ Mala

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/25/2021 6:43:00 PM

Thanks Mala! Didn’t know the contest is judged. Must have a look at the entries soon