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Weary Little Daisies

Her entire life Her petals, knifed. With a painful relief Her petals gone, grief. She awaits the rain Only known friend. Down days. With Weary ways. Dreary little babies Weary little daisies. She becomes a desert Only to receive water. This is for you beauty babies. Water, You need? I give. She bows her head Burned by beams. Beauty babies, your so pale You could almost be white. You'll be okay... Just wait for the cycle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/17/2015 3:51:00 PM
Hi Dominique, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/17/2015 2:50:00 PM
Dominique, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/16/2015 10:23:00 PM
This is lovely, and a great first submisison, Dominique. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy sharing and reading on this site. Viv x
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Lia Dominique
Date: 6/16/2015 11:00:00 PM
Thank you so much! I highly appreciate it!

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