Weary Little Daisies

Her entire life
Her petals, knifed.

With a painful relief
Her petals gone, grief.

She awaits the rain
Only known friend.

Down days. With
Weary ways.

Dreary little babies
Weary little daisies.

She becomes a desert
Only to receive water.

This is for you beauty babies.

Water, You need?
I give.

She bows her head 
Burned by beams.

Beauty babies, your so pale
You could almost be white.

You'll be okay... Just wait for the cycle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 17, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Hi Dominique, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 17, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Dominique, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 16, 2015 at 10:23 PM
This is lovely, and a great first submisison, Dominique. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you enjoy sharing and reading on this site. Viv x
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June 16, 2015 at 11:00 PM
Thank you so much! I highly appreciate it!
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