Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Wearing Just a Hat

There's certain things that are important in life
Like saying I love you to your very sweet wife
Or walking in Manhattan
Wearing only a hat on
Will that be frowned on in the sweet afterlife

© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman March 27, 2015 at 9:46 AM Uh, Only a hat... Hope it was only the rhyming your at... Perhaps a little more about a sweet wife... Will help with that afterlife... But for now... I truely vow... After reading this your Wiffey-poo might need a big hug... or maybe to sit down... LOL Jack Ellison March 27, 2015 at 7:03 PM Yah... er... it was just for rhyming purpose! Otherwise I would NEVER stoop so low!!! LOL xxx

Kp Nunez March 26, 2015 at 7:05 AM Not if it's Ed-on, er Eden. However Jack, you know such a thing, would cause others to sin...you know what I mean...:) Jack Ellison March 26, 2015 at 3:36 PM Methinks I'm being naughty lately!!! LOL Hugs, Jack xxx