Wealthcare Not Healthcare

Going to the doctor is such a thrill
I just can't wait til I get ill
I saw a pretty nurse
She and I converse
I only got sick when I saw the bill
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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D. Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 9:09 PM
their always is a down fall. congrats Larry, on your featured poem of the week"
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Congrats on your all too true limerick being featured. Vince
A   Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 7:55 AM
I love it Larry, congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
A  Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 7:51 AM
HI LARRY,GONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR POEM BEING FEATURED THIS WEEK~SKAT~
Esquire Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:11 PM
Dear Larry, a double Congratulations This is a Great feature and a well deserved Contest Win Superbly Done ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG
White Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Congrats on being featured Larry! If it was up to me I would feature your Eggicide poem every week
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Larry. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:34 AM
congrats on the featured poem this week! well written and witty!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 8:00 PM
Larry, this is one of the best I have read....delightfully funny and creative. Congratulations on it being featured. Aloha, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:33 PM
VEry cute!! congratulations again!
Sweetheart Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 4:46 PM
Congrats Larry my friend on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all.. with luv..ciao..
Ryerson Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:05 AM
I hear ya' Larry!... Only my nurse is not nearly as attractive as yours and always seems to be in a foul mood...thus my blood pressure always zooms through the roof (I don't think she likes my very much) Congrats on your win - Tim
Scripca Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Hahaha! That's so true...getting sick when you see the bill. Congrats!
White Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 3:28 AM
Good one Larry- Congrats
Mehta Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 9:08 PM
Congrats on the win, larry
Freeman Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 4:18 PM
Congratulations, Larry, on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 12:36 PM
adorable, congrats on your win
Taylor Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:00 AM
Congrats on all your recent wins, my friend. It's hard to keep up with them all. Nice going. Have a good weekend. Ralph
Murphy Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:55 AM
very funny tet so true i fell like crying when i open those bills loved it faleshia
Brown Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win Larry in Carolyn Devonshire's "Doctor Phobia! Quick Contest". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 9:04 AM
Congrats Larry on your win in the doctor contest with this great write.. ciao with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Larry, I think I'll get sick when I see the bill on Monday, too. Very funny poem! Many of the Soup's best humor writers provided a lot of laughs. There were many great entries and it was hard ranking them as each one gave me a laugh. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Taylor Avatar
August 19, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Excellent, my friend. Good luck. Ralph
A   Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 9:57 PM
If it is for the contest good luck,..p.d
Roberts Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 7:38 PM
adorable, good luck in the contest
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