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Weakest Link

Weakest Link Belt around a size eight waist curtains waiting to be close undressed, with a weak link touch hard like a buckle. M.J.F. (lady contest)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 1:36:00 AM

Weakest Link

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/11/2011 10:40:00 AM

Very thought-provoking poem, Hathor. Sensual as well! Thanks for your comment. Hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 1/17/2011 2:21:00 PM

I love the unusual perspective inherent in this. A unique way to look at this. Thank you for your kindness! Regards, Gerard

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/16/2011 10:55:00 PM

The mind ponders on this wondeful poem, just love it, good luck in contest. Harry

M.I.A .

Date: 1/15/2011 3:37:00 PM

Provoking! welcome to the soup and good luck on the contest. thanks for stopping by

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/15/2011 2:31:00 PM

thankxxx for supporting Michael's part of our co sponsored contest Hathor.. good luck and will read fully closer to judging time..luv.. appreciate ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 9:37:00 AM

This is a very sensual poem that paints a vivid image, Hathor. Awesome! I think this is the first poem of yours that I've read and I'll surely be on the lookout for more. Best wishes and a belated welcome to Poetry Soup, Carolyn

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/15/2011 6:51:00 AM

Hey that's pretty hot entry Lin~ra. Thanks for commenting on my work dear. Have a cool weekend.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/15/2011 6:36:00 AM

Cool entry, Lin~Ra! Thank you for your kind comments! Have a great weekend and best of luck in the contest!...Gert

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/14/2011 11:18:00 PM

fine write,lin~ra!! good luck in the contest!! hanks for dropping by... hope you will again some time! :) nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/14/2011 11:06:00 PM

Good luck in Michael and Linda's "Spicy" Contest, Lin~Ra! Spicy one for real... Always, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2011 10:49:00 PM

sweet , cool entry,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2011 10:00:00 PM

SPICY!!! And reads like haiku. LUv, Andrea

James Marshall Goff

Date: 1/14/2011 9:56:00 PM

this one gets a "holy cow!!!" welcome to the soup! Ammut Lin Ra!!!! you're cool!!!! jimbo

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/14/2011 9:43:00 PM

definitely a spicy contender in the contest, Lin~Ra; really like your title for this too, very fitting if I may say so :)-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)