Weakest Link

Weakest Link

Very thought-provoking poem, Hathor. Sensual as well! Thanks for your comment. Hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn

I love the unusual perspective inherent in this. A unique way to look at this. Thank you for your kindness! Regards, Gerard

The mind ponders on this wondeful poem, just love it, good luck in contest. Harry

Provoking! welcome to the soup and good luck on the contest. thanks for stopping by

thankxxx for supporting Michael's part of our co sponsored contest Hathor.. good luck and will read fully closer to judging time..luv.. appreciate ...

This is a very sensual poem that paints a vivid image, Hathor. Awesome! I think this is the first poem of yours that I've read and I'll surely be on the lookout for more. Best wishes and a belated welcome to Poetry Soup, Carolyn

Hey that's pretty hot entry Lin~ra. Thanks for commenting on my work dear. Have a cool weekend.

Cool entry, Lin~Ra! Thank you for your kind comments! Have a great weekend and best of luck in the contest!...Gert

fine write,lin~ra!! good luck in the contest!! hanks for dropping by... hope you will again some time! :) nette

Good luck in Michael and Linda's "Spicy" Contest, Lin~Ra! Spicy one for real... Always, Annalise

sweet , cool entry,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

SPICY!!! And reads like haiku. LUv, Andrea

this one gets a "holy cow!!!" welcome to the soup! Ammut Lin Ra!!!! you're cool!!!! jimbo

definitely a spicy contender in the contest, Lin~Ra; really like your title for this too, very fitting if I may say so :)-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :)