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Weakest Link

Weakest Link

Belt around a size eight waist
curtains waiting to be close
undressed, with a weak link touch
hard like a buckle.

M.J.F.  (lady contest)

Copyright © Hathor Ammutlinra | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/11/2013 1:36:00 AM Weakest Link Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/11/2011 10:40:00 AM Very thought-provoking poem, Hathor. Sensual as well! Thanks for your comment. Hope you post some new work soon. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Gerard Keogh Jr. Date: 1/17/2011 2:21:00 PM I love the unusual perspective inherent in this. A unique way to look at this. Thank you for your kindness! Regards, Gerard Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/16/2011 10:55:00 PM The mind ponders on this wondeful poem, just love it, good luck in contest. Harry Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 1/15/2011 3:37:00 PM Provoking! welcome to the soup and good luck on the contest. thanks for stopping by Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/15/2011 2:31:00 PM thankxxx for supporting Michael's part of our co sponsored contest Hathor.. good luck and will read fully closer to judging time..luv.. appreciate ... Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/15/2011 9:37:00 AM This is a very sensual poem that paints a vivid image, Hathor. Awesome! I think this is the first poem of yours that I've read and I'll surely be on the lookout for more. Best wishes and a belated welcome to Poetry Soup, Carolyn Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 1/15/2011 6:51:00 AM Hey that's pretty hot entry Lin~ra. Thanks for commenting on my work dear. Have a cool weekend. Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 1/15/2011 6:36:00 AM Cool entry, Lin~Ra! Thank you for your kind comments! Have a great weekend and best of luck in the contest!...Gert Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 1/14/2011 11:18:00 PM fine write,lin~ra!! good luck in the contest!! hanks for dropping by... hope you will again some time! :) nette Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/14/2011 11:06:00 PM Good luck in Michael and Linda's "Spicy" Contest, Lin~Ra! Spicy one for real... Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/14/2011 10:49:00 PM sweet , cool entry,, good luck in the contest,..p.d. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/14/2011 10:00:00 PM SPICY!!! And reads like haiku. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 1/14/2011 9:56:00 PM this one gets a "holy cow!!!" welcome to the soup! Ammut Lin Ra!!!! you're cool!!!! jimbo Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 1/14/2011 9:43:00 PM definitely a spicy contender in the contest, Lin~Ra; really like your title for this too, very fitting if I may say so :)-- wish you the best in the contest :) -- nikko :) Login to Reply