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Weak Spots Iv

The first trill of a bird at dawn, A window overlooking the sea, The liberation in a brand new day, Soft, gentle voices in another room. A train of thought that stays, Blooming into hope and life, Light petals touching the ankles A baby bird cradled in the palm Bare feet from grass to doorstep, Droplets dripping from the hair, Puzzled look followed by A gentle familiarity The fresh smell of laundry, Lathered soap on sooty hands, Forehead pressed on theirs, Welcomes that are truly welcoming 2.4.20 Note: I decided to post my Weak Spots series here - a romantic series I wrote in the month of February, for those few that remember what I started on here. I am happy to have finished this series this year. More to come soon!

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Date: 2/9/2023 6:41:00 PM
Love this, very gifted you are my friend, the time taken in thought for these is noticed, very well put together: )
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Date: 11/2/2020 6:58:00 AM
You were so weak, that you got married lol... You have an awesome way with words my friend....
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:45:00 PM
You just can't beat authenticity...quaint clues into the secret and simple charm of life given here in your poem...J.A.B.
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Date: 9/21/2020 6:06:00 AM
Well expressed...for me would include freshly baked bread...
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