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We Will Triumph

Sitting in the waiting room in pre-op, weight and height taken, filling out a two-page form, your hand trembling with age. A history of a long life, the body betraying the best years— the Golden Years, where time moves slower. The neck that needs physio, the knee throbbing after hours on your feet, the heart beating in time with the new pacemaker, its battery promising at least ten more years. Thankful for technology, we get to hold hands another day. The myriad aches and pains, a fleeting smile— the young man with a full head of hair and a light step, looking back at me. Forty years of a good life, not wanting to see it end. Together, hand in hand, we will triumph. Because each second, each minute, each hour, each day we have together is a reminder— of the life we’ve built, of the love mirrored in our eyes. What a wonderful reminder of the simple things in life, as we sit together, with hope.

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Date: 3/8/2025 7:24:00 PM
' We get to hold hands another day, what a wonderful reminder of the simple things in life. ' So true. While your thoughts are tender and emotional, they're also filled with ' hope. ' Many wonderful blessings to you, Lise. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/22/2025 11:02:00 PM
You put it well in your poem. Life gets harder but more precious. I enjoy your poem. I like the romantic ending. May you continue in happiness.
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Lise Clendening
Date: 2/22/2025 11:16:00 PM
More precious, indeed. Thank you, Hilda!
Date: 2/20/2025 5:20:00 AM
Sigh, this is so touching and soulfully moving really, written on time and ageing and the challenges that comes with it, youv written on that in such a powerful manner! I really felt the depth of this poem, as i see loved ones age too, and as time goes by we learn more about illness and how health sometimes can take a turn. A fave this is for me. As i felt this so deeply! Sending you light today and always
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Lise Clendening
Date: 2/20/2025 6:09:00 AM
Ink, We do think we have forever when we are younger. Life is long, but fleeting to. Thank you for your light. Hugs!

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