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We Were Seventeen

When we were seventeen there was a day When all the little pieces seemed to fit Life was easy being in love to stay How hard could it be just to go and get All the little pieces stayed for awhile We swam in ponds and sun dried on the bank That summer we still recall with a smile It was perfect and we had God to thank Then the world began to turn as it does We found that we had other seeds to sow Our love wasn't the same as it once was And so we chose seperate paths to go Then all the little pieces came apart And we learned the vagaries of the heart September 15, 2016 For Contest All The Little Pieces, for Broken Wings

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Date: 9/25/2016 12:10:00 PM
Oh the sweetness and the sorrow of young love! I enjoyed your poem, Larry! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/26/2016 12:38:00 AM
Thank you, Kim
Date: 9/24/2016 10:43:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write ~
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 9/26/2016 12:39:00 AM
Thank you for your sponsorship and for the placement. Fun contest!..Larry

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