We Were Boys

Childhood memories, fields of spring, watching bumble bees at their work.
Had a wiffle bat as did two younger brothers, now I feel like a jerk.

Did a deal of bashing, the occasional batting, my jar ready for the reward.
The mischief of youthful "must win" determination, or was it that we were bored?

Nine bees in a jar, three are just stunned, man I was doing so well.
One woke up, darn I was stung and now it was starting to swell.

Nine bees in a jar, this time they're all dead, or at least they know how to play.
Brian's got twelve, I'm slipping behind, and Mike's made a killing today.

Mike got bored and quietly left the game, ha! His bees are all mine.
Brian got stung, there goes his fun, returning to home for a time.

Looking over fields down trampled and Lord if grandpa saw what we've done.
Somehow I reckon he wouldn't be happy, but wow I must say that was fun.

Jar full of bees, I'm all alone, man there goes all the joy.
The things that we did, revisited by man, remembering when he was a boy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Bertin Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 4:49 PM
Ahhh, the remembrance of the past.
Zerlaut Avatar
December 1, 2022 at 1:00 AM
It's been a year since your comment and I don't know how I missed it John. Thanks for visiting!
Buck Avatar
March 10, 2020 at 5:13 PM
Jesse: I always wonder when I reminisce about the good old days if they were really a good as I remember or am I just forgetting the bad stuff. :o) I don't really care. It seems real to me. Your work reminded me of that. Thanks for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Zerlaut Avatar
July 26, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Oldbuck, the important part is if the good times were worth remembering while the bad times were easily forgot.... then we have a happy life to look back on, and little left to regret. Thanks for your thoughts
A   Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:49 PM
awesome couplet....linda-
Zerlaut Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 2:18 AM
Thank you, I seriously can't believe I failed to comment in return on this. I'm sorry Linda!
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