We Share a Love: a Collaboration With Jan Allison

Teddy lives in a world of strife,
Where fight for existence is stiff.
He writes poems that show his daily struggle,
As he tries to understand why there’s no mingle
Between different tribes and clans;
God, well maybe has better plans
His eyes are black, and his skin brown,
Like the Mother Earth he has grown.
Poverty and corruption is the norm,
As crime gangs day to day always form
His world I say, is so different from mine

Jan tries hard to make folks smile
Forget their troubles for a while
She writes poems that may make you weep
Other poems she pens you may wish to keep
Her eyes are green, her hair is titian -
The color’s out a bottle - that grey CAN be beaten
She lives on a little Island surrounded by the sea
where the air is fresh and there's no poverty
Unemployment is low, there is little crime
Her world is so very different from mine

We share a love;
A love for letters, words,
And verses,
Knit together to create a deep message
That forever echoes deep within our souls.
 
Difference in race, nationality and ideology
Are all fused together in rhythm and sonnets,
Making us citizens of the world,
Enjoying the anarchy of love.
 
We are miles apart across the sea
But we share a love called poetry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/22/2017 12:34:00 PM
So good to see this in the best new poems list Teddy... we must collaborate again sometime my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/28/2017 3:12:00 AM
Yes, indeed! We need to come up with another piece soon... I'm proud too to see it in the Top 100 list! B) It's wonderful writing with you, buddy! *^_^*
Date: 6/26/2017 6:16:00 AM
What a wonderful collaboration bringing much understanding of you two to us! A marvelous outcome brilliantly written! Congratulations to both!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/2/2017 6:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios, for reading and enjoying our work!! :)
Date: 6/22/2017 11:14:00 PM
To see people building bridges and not fences, so so so lovely indeed!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/25/2017 5:44:00 AM
Greetings, Arthur. That's what we need in this world. Thank you so much for your kind comment!! :-)
Date: 6/22/2017 8:39:00 PM
This is FANTASTIC, Teddy and Jan. FAVE!!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2017 3:40:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying our work!! *^_^*
Date: 6/22/2017 11:16:00 AM
How novel of the two of you to write bios of each other and then to tie it together with ribbons inked from your pens. Bravo to you both!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2017 3:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Lin. We really appreciate it!! *^_^*
Date: 6/22/2017 10:57:00 AM
This is so lovely Teddy and Jan. And very touching. Indeed, worlds apart, and still a shared love. Wonderful collaboration, both of you!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2017 3:34:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. You're so kind!! *^_^*
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2017 3:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Darren, for reading and enjoying our work!! *^_^*
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Jan Allison
Date: 6/22/2017 11:07:00 AM
Thanks Darren it was great fun writing with such an accomplished poet as Teddy:-)Hugs Jan xx
Date: 6/22/2017 5:25:00 AM
Teddy it has been and honour and a pleasure to write with you and I am delighted with the final poem! :-) hugs Jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2017 3:00:00 AM
Thank you so much for working with me, to create this inimitable piece, Jan!! *^_^* I'm really delighted to see our work here!! ;-)
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