We See a Way

As sure as the day is wont to die with night, I give you my love with all my might Descend now and lie with me. You and I agree always to see a way through. We now can live free, and by God’s hallowed decree, to love tomorrow and yes, tonight, As sure as the day is wont to die with night.
(Rhyme - Andaree form created by Andrea Dietrich)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 11:54 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
Fowler Avatar
February 6, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Many thanks Sara. I appreciate your visit and comments :)
La France Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Linda, a lovely poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge, Andaree form, well done, Constance
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Thank you so much for the engaging contest and my placement Constance :)
Hawley Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:40 AM
I like the hourglass style of rhyme I am seeing with this poem.
Fowler Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 10:52 AM
You should try it Miranda. A fun form created by Andrea. I enjoyed the challenge. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:51 PM
You are a first-class poet. To write in this form so many times is a feat on its own. The good Lord knows how I labored to write just one.
Fowler Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 6:25 AM
I try, Victor, I try. The first one I wrote actually fitted bette with Regina's contest, so I had to write another for Constance. LOL. I enjoyed your Winter Star and think you did a fine job with the form. hugs :)
Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 7:58 PM
Your Andaree reads poetically beautifully for me, Linda! Very nice! :) gw
Fowler Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 6:23 AM
I truly appreciate your comments gw. Thank you! :) laf
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