Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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We Said Our Goodbyes

and all the while
summer came and left
yet the breeze lingered

persistent as the warm caress
we wished would never end



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on August 13, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 4TH

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Robertina B. September 12, 2022 at 5:33 AM Sweet and so romantic, Line.. I really enjoyed this! The scenery is absolutely breath taking, my friend.. Many blessings! Line Gauthier September 12, 2022 at 9:04 AM Thank you, Robertina ~ most appreciated

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2022 at 8:10 AM It is amazing how emotionally moved we can become by reading just a few words in a short poem. Your entry did that for me Line. My words can’t express its magnificence. Straight into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving win. Blessings xxoo Line Gauthier August 20, 2022 at 4:31 PM Thanks for your lovely message, Connie. Most appreciated ~