We Once Held Time

we once held time
as if it was a never-ending story
sitting beside your bed
watching the monitors announce vitals
tubes running in and out 
we have been reduced to moments
as i hold the hand dearest to my heart
watch the slow slipping away
i hold a deeper strength within you gave me
knowing what we have is yet to come
that we have only held
a crumb of Love's feast
we were meant for more 
then just a life with each other
we were a promise that will be kept
we are that first breath, destined in Perpetuum
when once again we embrace
where you will finally dance with perfection
how i will miss those little mistakes
i so adored about you
as we waltz thru the galaxies
in your arms, in your eyes, in eternity
once again i have stolen his lines
the thief who stole my heart on a park bench
when i finally made him close 
his book of poetry and kiss me
i was not to be a Beatrice denied
Zorro must surrender the mask
with his first kiss, his soft yet secure embrace
whisked me into the infinity of his tenderness
i wait in the fullness of his love
until i am in his caress again
when this dinner for one
becomes an empty table 
that escaped into where dreams
are more then forevermore
they live in the Grace of God's Fate
who long knew us before that first breath
where vows evaporate into a Promise fulfilled

1/2/18

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Date: 4/2/2023 4:16:00 AM
Beautiful description of a nearly universal experience--watching a loved one go. I especially like the line "as we waltz thru the galaxies."
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Date: 1/14/2023 7:52:00 AM
Stunning - that's all I can say! Depth of your expressions take my breath away! Warm wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 1/13/2023 12:52:00 PM
Quite stunning & beautifully scripted Timothy!
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Date: 1/4/2023 12:44:00 AM
Wow, Timothy, this is truly a wondrous dedication, one which i place in my favourites to read and read again.
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Date: 12/30/2022 5:42:00 AM
Amazing,, heartfelt tribute you wrote. Love of family exudes throughout. So well written!
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Date: 12/29/2022 5:37:00 AM
Very beautiful tribute~ the expression of love, gives the soul wings, and a never-ending span of light. I also believe, that earth existence is only our prelude step into greater life and discovery. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 12/29/2022 3:59:00 AM
Such beautiful lines to honor your parents love story as the waltz together through the galaxies. SuZ
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:52:00 PM
wow, I'm floored and speechless, your sense of observation is so keen and your creative muse so sharp it leaves the reader silent. Thank you for sharing such deep emotions. I can almost see her through your eyes and your poetry, she must have been amazing.
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Date: 12/29/2022 5:30:00 AM
she is still amazing....Feb. 14th i will celebrate 28 years of sober living which is proof to all mothers....He hears your prayers....while she was in hospice among her favorite family pictures was the ceremony of The Blessing of the Hands....i had graduated from the hospital chaplaincy program....
Date: 12/25/2022 7:14:00 PM
this continues the poem, "there is a reason i requested this restaurant" which is his story. this is her story and it comes from the time i spent with mom in the months Dad died from Leukemia. this is how i remember the core values i listened to. Mom was a typical housewife, never had a job, never learned to drive, and her only source of the outside world was the Christian School where she volunteered...in the end this woman rolled up her sleeves and for 40 years served God and her family..
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