Alexis Y. Poet Monorhyme

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I really in enjoy the monorhyme form. However, I found the enclosed rhyme to be a challenge. I hope it makes sense.

We Met In June

We met in June, on a fine afternoon
Our hearts did swoon,under the full moon 
You said we'd meet soon, my heart was in tune
We were so attuned, in our sweet cocoon
Each day was our honeymoon, as we spooned
It was inopportune, love bloomed in June 

















Contest: Rhymers Delight- Internal Monorhyme
Sponsor:  John Hamilton

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Justin Bordner January 15, 2017 at 8:22 PM The glee and tragedy of love melody touches my heart terribly yet sweetly in this poetry Alexis...J.A.B.

Mark Martin January 12, 2017 at 3:49 PM Nice poem Alexis! Congrats! :-)

Sandra Haight January 10, 2017 at 7:10 PM A great poem with good internal/ending Monorhymes, Alexis! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus January 10, 2017 at 3:34 PM Oh, yes, it did make sense, Alexis; so lovely and romantic! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker January 9, 2017 at 10:51 PM Love in June is supposed to be quite steamy. Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem.

Afolabi Muideen January 8, 2017 at 9:39 AM Wow! The rhyme is so great! Excellent write.........A.M.

Robert Lindley January 7, 2017 at 10:16 PM EXCELLENT CHOICE OF RHYMING WORD AS ITS DIFFICULTY MUST HAVE BEEN QUITE A REWARDING TASK. Solid 7 on this jewel..

Daniel Turner January 6, 2017 at 10:53 PM I must say, you picked a very difficult word as your rhymer. Well done, Alexis:)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 6, 2017 at 10:47 PM Yep. This is cool rhyming, Alexis. Top notch poetry. Takes mad skill to rhyme in my opinion. Much harder than doing free verse. 7 up to you. Love this poem. Love always.

Vera Duggan January 6, 2017 at 10:09 PM Hi Alexis, it sure does make sense, and the rhyming is perfect, I love June as we were married in June so yes I absolutely love this little rhyme, take care my friend.....Vera

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2017 at 7:36 PM this is really nice, Alexis, Dreamy!!

Nette Onclaud January 6, 2017 at 3:51 PM now, you make me sigh with this sweet offering, alexis... grreat pen!..huggs

Jan Allison January 6, 2017 at 2:33 PM You did a brilliant job Alexis I've not even begun to think of a theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian January 6, 2017 at 2:30 PM Beautiful! I think you did a great job! I really enjoyed this delightful and romantic piece, my dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 6, 2017 at 12:55 PM - A great poem, enjoy reading it Alexis - A lovely time; June :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Alexis Y. January 6, 2017 at 1:45 PM Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I found this form to be a challenge. I appreciate that you stopped by;-) Alexis

Chris Green January 6, 2017 at 12:45 PM I love it Alexis, you did a great job with this one. I think you might just win that contest. This reads so easily and fluently. Really nice. Alexis Y. January 6, 2017 at 1:02 PM Hi Chris, Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I appreciate your continued support. PS, thanks for inspiring me:-) Alexis