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I really in enjoy the monorhyme form. However, I found the enclosed rhyme to be a challenge. I hope it makes sense.

We met in June, on a fine afternoon Our hearts did swoon,under the full moon You said we'd meet soon, my heart was in tune We were so attuned, in our sweet cocoon Each day was our honeymoon, as we spooned It was inopportune, love bloomed in June Contest: Rhymers Delight- Internal Monorhyme Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Justin Bordner

Date: 1/15/2017 8:22:00 PM

The glee and tragedy of love melody touches my heart terribly yet sweetly in this poetry Alexis...J.A.B.

Mark Martin

Date: 1/12/2017 3:49:00 PM

Nice poem Alexis! Congrats! :-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/10/2017 7:10:00 PM

A great poem with good internal/ending Monorhymes, Alexis! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 1/10/2017 3:34:00 PM

Oh, yes, it did make sense, Alexis; so lovely and romantic! Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/9/2017 10:51:00 PM

Love in June is supposed to be quite steamy. Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 1/8/2017 9:39:00 AM

Wow! The rhyme is so great! Excellent write.........A.M.

Robert Lindley

Date: 1/7/2017 10:16:00 PM

EXCELLENT CHOICE OF RHYMING WORD AS ITS DIFFICULTY MUST HAVE BEEN QUITE A REWARDING TASK. Solid 7 on this jewel..

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/6/2017 10:53:00 PM

I must say, you picked a very difficult word as your rhymer. Well done, Alexis:)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/6/2017 10:47:00 PM

Yep. This is cool rhyming, Alexis. Top notch poetry. Takes mad skill to rhyme in my opinion. Much harder than doing free verse. 7 up to you. Love this poem. Love always.

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/6/2017 10:09:00 PM

Hi Alexis, it sure does make sense, and the rhyming is perfect, I love June as we were married in June so yes I absolutely love this little rhyme, take care my friend.....Vera

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2017 7:36:00 PM

this is really nice, Alexis, Dreamy!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2017 3:51:00 PM

now, you make me sigh with this sweet offering, alexis... grreat pen!..huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/6/2017 2:33:00 PM

You did a brilliant job Alexis I've not even begun to think of a theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/6/2017 2:30:00 PM

Beautiful! I think you did a great job! I really enjoyed this delightful and romantic piece, my dear.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2017 12:55:00 PM

- A great poem, enjoy reading it Alexis - A lovely time; June :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/6/2017 1:45:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. I found this form to be a challenge. I appreciate that you stopped by;-) Alexis

Chris Green

Date: 1/6/2017 12:45:00 PM

I love it Alexis, you did a great job with this one. I think you might just win that contest. This reads so easily and fluently. Really nice.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/6/2017 1:02:00 PM

Hi Chris, Thank you so much for your encouraging comment. I appreciate your continued support. PS, thanks for inspiring me:-) Alexis