...We Meld As Roots Twine

we meld as roots twine 
bark nor storm infringe on love 
death, cold, raw, a pauper’s dream...         

braid graceful passion
bend before heart’s storm...           
engulf beginnings

honeyed breath kiss on
life dancing on, babies born 
tagged in blissful wondering...

forever mine dear
a bed to begin and to end...
embrace of me

*A wedding verse in Sedoka Form

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/27/2010 9:02:00 AM
"Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's win! Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/19/2010 8:13:00 AM
Big Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's success in Dr Ram great contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:28:00 AM
Many congratulations Deborah on your win in Dr.Ram's fine contest. Must look up this form, not one I have heard off. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James :)
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Date: 9/19/2010 7:10:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest ..an exceptional piece TEACH.. enjoy your wonderful win this happy Sunday with luv.. from pupil in luv...luv...luv..
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Date: 9/19/2010 6:24:00 AM
I enjoyed your quite unique approach to the theme of the contest. Debbie
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Date: 8/31/2010 9:12:00 PM
Lovely images here. Thank you for sharing your work =) love, farah
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:04:00 AM
The imagery of marriage here is blinding my eyes Deborah, you have captured the truth of marriage and it's bliss. Love it. Love, Sami.
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:50:00 PM
enjoyed reading today...I never check this form out...will have to try one.
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:38:00 PM
Ahhh....Sedoka...so orginal! "life dancing on...babies born tagged in blissful wondering...." wonderful lines....how do you do it?
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Date: 8/19/2010 3:14:00 PM
Nice one D.G., how have you been,..p.d.
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