Debbie Guzzi Poet Epithalamium

...We Meld As Roots Twine

we meld as roots twine 
bark nor storm infringe on love 
death, cold, raw, a pauper’s dream...         

braid graceful passion
bend before heart’s storm...           
engulf beginnings

honeyed breath kiss on
life dancing on, babies born 
tagged in blissful wondering...

forever mine dear
a bed to begin and to end...
embrace of me

*A wedding verse in Sedoka Form

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John Freeman September 27, 2010 at 9:02 AM "Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's win! Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown September 27, 2010 at 6:12 AM Congratulations on your win Deborah in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Epithalamium" Love,Carol

John Freeman September 19, 2010 at 8:13 AM Big Congratulations Debbie on your worthy poem's success in Dr Ram great contest. Agape, Moses

James Fraser September 19, 2010 at 7:28 AM Many congratulations Deborah on your win in Dr.Ram's fine contest. Must look up this form, not one I have heard off. Have a wonderful Sunday >> James :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 19, 2010 at 7:10 AM Congrats Debbie on your great win in Dr. Ram's contest ..an exceptional piece TEACH.. enjoy your wonderful win this happy Sunday with luv.. from pupil in luv...luv...luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta September 19, 2010 at 6:24 AM I enjoyed your quite unique approach to the theme of the contest. Debbie

Farah Chamma August 31, 2010 at 9:12 PM Lovely images here. Thank you for sharing your work =) love, farah

Sami Al-Khalili August 20, 2010 at 12:04 AM The imagery of marriage here is blinding my eyes Deborah, you have captured the truth of marriage and it's bliss. Love it. Love, Sami.

Doris Culverhouse August 19, 2010 at 5:50 PM enjoyed reading today...I never check this form out...will have to try one.

Carrie Richards August 19, 2010 at 3:38 PM Ahhh....Sedoka...so orginal! "life dancing on...babies born tagged in blissful wondering...." wonderful lines....how do you do it?

Poet Destroyer A August 19, 2010 at 3:14 PM Nice one D.G., how have you been,..p.d.