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We Live On Borrowed Time

On the wheels of our dreams
The hammer of Thor
Shall crack this fountain sky
What words shall find
The patient clock unwinds
We live on borrowed time

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Hyle Chu

June 29, 2009 at 3:35 PM

Damn I hate those "patient clocks". They tick and tock as we make our moves. Will the results come in before time runs out? Well writ.

Lena Pate

May 25, 2009 at 3:13 PM

Intuitive and reflective. Referencing the lore of old to the continuous of time. Nicely penned.

Barb Geerts

May 24, 2009 at 8:25 PM

We definately do live on borrowed time. each and every day.. Great job

Carolyn Devonshire

May 24, 2009 at 7:05 PM

Thor was the inspiration for many Nordic tales and his power lives on in your write. Some believe everything that has ever happened continues to occur, simultaneously playing in a warp of "borrowed time." Intriguing poem, Gregory! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

May 24, 2009 at 6:54 PM

Gregory very interesting poem - I once was very interested in Germanic and Viking Mythology - We do in fact live on borrowed time and any moment could be our last - You know this going into my favorites - God Bless, mj

P Sheart

May 24, 2009 at 6:32 PM

Gregory Excellent! Truly enjoyed. Love Light Truth Patricia

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