Home » Poems » Valsa George » We Live in a Fantasy World

Valsa George | + Follow Poet |

We Live in a Fantasy World

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Valsa George.

December-10- 2024

You Live in a World of Fantasy Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Eve Roper

~ Placed First~

I’m a tiny winged fairy. Enjoy supping from each flower. Look at the dragonfly so merry! Sunflower is our bower. He is my dear companion, cute. His wings are so light and airy. Sometimes up into the sky, we shoot. Our feats will make you cheery.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2024 5:08:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/13/2024 4:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Valsa :) - Merry Christmas :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/12/2024 9:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Fantasy" write. So Cute... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Joe Dimino

Date: 12/10/2024 2:47:00 PM

"Our feats will make you cheery." A darling, sweet poem. A delightfully written nectar. Thank you for sharing.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/10/2024 2:34:00 PM

Cute to imagine them shooting up into the sky together! Cute!

Jay Narain

Date: 12/10/2024 10:31:00 AM

Nice fairy tale. Fits the picture details.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/10/2024 7:06:00 AM

Dear sweet valsa, a very well written interpretation of the picture prompt. I love the rhymes and flow and how youv also written from the perspective of the tiny winged fairy. How beautiful with dragonfly as your companion in this fantasy poem. I absolutely love the idea and what youv done for the picture. Especially love “ Sunflower is our bower.” and also “ His wings are so light and airy.“ seamless take! Pleasure reading your poem. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/10/2024 2:19:00 AM

I used to write about fairies. Loved your short but delicate poem. Best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/10/2024 1:12:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/9/2024 8:43:00 PM

You interpreted it the picture well Valsa, Good luck in the contest.. Tom