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We Know the Way

I was helplessly lost in a quaint little town, frustrated and floundering, wearing a frown in the MARKET for oddities I’d heard about from a friend who’d raved, “Bill’s Thrills will please you, no doubt! I recall how to get there–I think. Write this down!” I was careful to write down each minute detail. I’d set out feeling positive I could not fail. Since I had full directions, I knew I’d soon find Bill’s Thrills, but then getting lost blew my poor mind. My heart beat too fast and my face grew so pale, . Just when I’d given up on locating that shop, an unusual SIGN on the right made me stop. It said, “We Know the Way”; and an ARROW, bright green— and quite curvy—led me to a most puzzling scene, a small shop—almost HIDDEN on a mountaintop. I bought two picture frames and a Disney whatnot. Then my strong curiosity made me ask what was behind the shop’s name. He said, “It did quite well as Bill’s Thrills, but I changed it when I started to sell these TomTom’s. They’re popular; I sell a lot! Then so gladly I paid for a TomTom and learned how to program it. No longer lost, I returned to my house. Now quite often I think of that night; in the middle of nowhere I witnessed the height of IRONY that took me a while to discern. March 25, 2018, entered in Julia Ward's Hidden Market Contest

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Date: 3/26/2018 2:53:00 PM
Great storytelling Janice..
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/26/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thanks so much, S.O.! Janice
Date: 3/26/2018 7:57:00 AM
Really a fun poem, Janice! love the "Bills Frills" and a great entry for the contest, Good Luck xxoo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/26/2018 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! Janice
Date: 3/26/2018 7:32:00 AM
Enjoyed the trip to your special market. You found the goodies and in the process, you found the way! A treat to read this story..best for a win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice

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