We Huddle At the Water's Edge

blue-gray egrets huddle 
at the water's edge
to watch a school
of copper head
goldfish 
sail by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 2, 2011 at 10:20 PM
I really like this write! With just a few words you evoked a fantastic image. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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