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We Hesitate

rushing forward into love, we hesitate give pause and thought then continue into each other’s embrace it is a clean slate nothing forbidden yet we hesitate, holding hands in the cobblestone darkness are we lovers or are we friends is there a difference? passion being overwhelming we hesitate to set up lifestyle we are mobile and kiss at terminal entrances so others see the intensity of our love so overpowering and then we hesitate love comes in a bottle of cognac and vanishes with the sober dawn it flows and the valves are shut we speak the words then we hesitate 11/23/20

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Date: 11/29/2020 11:00:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Juxtaposition contest, Janis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/27/2020 11:03:00 PM
That conflict between "are we friends or lovers" is so hard. You captured it well, Janis. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 11/25/2020 10:14:00 AM
Hi Janis, I enjoyed the read.Congratulations on your winning write.It’s good to see you posting again.Have a Happy Thanksgiving:-)Alexis
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Date: 11/25/2020 7:11:00 AM
Sometimes it is good to hesitate, as when we rush we can make fools out of ourselves... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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